Intimate Once Again

Power down the device
  Fire up your pencil and eraser
The act of writing intimate once again
  A cozy booth for two in a candlelit café

Pressure to produce ebbs away
  Like the tide retreating from the shoreline
Thoughts flit in and out of consciousness
  Butterflies emerging from their cocoons

Contests, prizes, glory all pale 
beside the discovery that is yours --
  As you grip your pencil
  The machine loosens its grip on you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Unfortunately I’m having problems writing with my hand but I love the sentiment! Let that ink drip like midnight oil, sweet like lemon and lavender :)
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Sorry to read about the problems. I hope that they are of a temporary nature, Kim!! Best wishes, Gershon
Mchattie Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Good point. Keep it simple.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Thanks for YOUR good point, David: Just like the sharp point on a pencil or the 'ball'point on a pen! :) gw
Bauer Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 4:34 PM
well said, gershon!
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Well-written, Ilene! :) gw
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Hello Greshon! Love your line.. Contests, prizes glory all pale, etc. How very accurate! Thank you Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 9:01 PM
All that glitter isn't gold, they say... ~ gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, my paper is handy, and my pen is ready to created poetry. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thank you GW Have a nice evening my friend.
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 9:00 PM
My paper and pen are ready too...as soon as I finish replying to wonderful comments like the one you've written! :) gw
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