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Intimate Once Again

Power down the device Fire up your pencil and eraser The act of writing intimate once again A cozy booth for two in a candlelit café Pressure to produce ebbs away Like the tide retreating from the shoreline Thoughts flit in and out of consciousness Butterflies emerging from their cocoons Contests, prizes, glory all pale beside the discovery that is yours -- As you grip your pencil The machine loosens its grip on you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/4/2019 7:27:00 AM
Unfortunately I’m having problems writing with my hand but I love the sentiment! Let that ink drip like midnight oil, sweet like lemon and lavender :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2019 10:41:00 AM
Sorry to read about the problems. I hope that they are of a temporary nature, Kim!! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/3/2019 10:48:00 PM
Good point. Keep it simple.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2019 10:40:00 AM
Thanks for YOUR good point, David: Just like the sharp point on a pencil or the 'ball'point on a pen! :) gw
Date: 4/3/2019 4:34:00 PM
well said, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2019 9:01:00 PM
Well-written, Ilene! :) gw
Date: 4/3/2019 3:15:00 PM
Hello Greshon! Love your line.. Contests, prizes glory all pale, etc. How very accurate! Thank you Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2019 9:01:00 PM
All that glitter isn't gold, they say... ~ gw
Date: 4/3/2019 2:50:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, my paper is handy, and my pen is ready to created poetry. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/4/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thank you GW Have a nice evening my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2019 9:00:00 PM
My paper and pen are ready too...as soon as I finish replying to wonderful comments like the one you've written! :) gw

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