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Faded Dreams the playground of our dreams is gone faded innocence and laughter I tried to find you to tell you but you were no longer waiting. We became what others wanted prisoners of a material world. Now our world is filled with echoed pain We can no longer wish on stars.

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 11/26/2023 7:46:00 PM

Bienvenue to Poetry Soup Lisa. This poem reminds me of a highschool, first love. I'll never forget him, a curly haired, brown eyed fellow w/ long eye lashes. Your first 5 lines brought him back to my thoughts. I hope you write more soon. Your poemsI have read so far are just delightful !

Kosta Ki

Date: 4/25/2016 1:56:00 AM

Love this poem Lisa, I feel it deep within. Reminds me of someone special too. -Kosta

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 2:25:00 AM

Lisa, nice to see this one again. Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 12:50:00 AM

Hi Lisa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 12/19/2015 11:06:00 PM

We all get bit by adult reality's buffet of disappointment, but we can still choose to order off the kid's dream menu. Nice write, and welcome to the Soup!

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 6:19:00 PM

Lisa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKA