Ann Gilmour Poet Shape

International Space Station

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ISS 
so clear tonight
ISS 
such an awesome sight
ISS
 will be back soon
00.57
 ~~~~~~~~~second sighting of the night~~~~~~~~
ISS
glides overhead
ISS
 you make me swoon
ISS
must rest my weary head
ISS
~~~~~~~and so to bed to dream instead~~~~~~~
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please fly me to the Moon )
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Written 17/18  July 2020 after witnessing my second awesome sighting of the night...

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Kim Rodrigues July 27, 2020 at 5:09 AM Your mind is filled with creativity, Ann! “Fly me to the moon.” Send me! <3 Kim Ann Gilmour July 29, 2020 at 12:43 PM Thank you for the lovely compliment Kim, I really appreciate it my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph P. DiMino July 26, 2020 at 7:37 AM Not at all surprising that what is out there is as fascinating as what is inside; love this one. Great imagination. Ann Gilmour July 26, 2020 at 9:45 AM Hi Joe, so happy that you enjoyed my poem, I am totally fascinated with space, the moon, and the universe and spend a great deal of time looking up into our beautiful sky. I am about to take delivery of my first telescope (a present from my grandson & his girlfriend) I am so excited... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham July 18, 2020 at 4:25 AM Beautiful shape Ann, I was lucky to catch sight of it a few days ago at a silly hour when all normal folk were asleep lol. Hope your break is going well Enjoy your weekend Tom Ann Gilmour July 26, 2020 at 9:42 AM Have just returned from a week in Devon and saw the ISS on two occasions, I never tire of seeing it... Thank you Tom. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger July 18, 2020 at 1:48 AM Fabulous aircraft Ann. Good luck in the contest! I rarely do shape poems; they take one thing I do not have - patience. Ann Gilmour July 26, 2020 at 9:41 AM Sorry for the delay in asnwering your great comments Caren, have been away, but thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

John Watt July 17, 2020 at 7:59 PM Ann, I love your shape poem of the ISS! I can tell how much you love seeing this in the night sky, even scheduling your evening around its appearances. Have you been able to see the comet yet? I've been looking but there is too much city light and cloud cover so far. I'll keep trying! Love your poem and your new artsy avatar too! Your star buddy ~ John Ann Gilmour July 17, 2020 at 8:07 PM Thank you star buddy it is 2.00 am here and my eyes are shutting down, haha. No sign of the comet but have seen some amazing pictures taken from the ISS ~ check them out from NASA site if you can John. Thanks for your lovely comments John and yes re my new avatar, I thought it time for a change in the style of Warhol ~ glad you like it. Keep those space eyes peeled my friend. With stars in mine from Ann ****