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Internal Debating

Suicide is no more pain
in the life that we live
nothing left for us to gain
and we cannot forgive

If you were right here
and not so far away
maybe i would not fear
maybe i'd want to stay

Take time and think it over
no more ache, sadness or pain
all because of you, a lover?
longing for death will refrain

So if you use logic,
take time to think it through
producing this black magic
is what keeps me true

All that is left for me to ask
is if suffering is worth the smile
the cloak i wear, on my face a mask
waiting for you all the while

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/3/2009 2:56:00 PM
i can relate and feel this pain indeed--Charma
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Date: 11/3/2009 6:03:00 AM
Whoa...this is so...i don't even have words. It evokes certain emotions in me...I feel your pain.
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