Internal Beauty

Kissed by morning dew, 
The swirl of natures beauty; 
The heart of a rose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:20 AM
The heart of a rose, depicted so delicatly.
Goombi Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:03 AM
Nice detail, the heart of a rose. I can see it in the haiku.
Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:43 PM
I like how you beautifully described the inside of a rose. Love E.
Martin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 11:00 PM
Great description of the inside of a rose, your work is fascinating. Tyler
Tugaff Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 7:06 AM
My friend Raul, you are a nature lover....boy. Ernilando
Strand Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 6:24 AM
Very true Raul.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:13 PM
raul that was very very good...........................................danielle
Gass Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Absloutely lovely, Raul. Thank you for gracing us with this lovely image. Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Feel like I am seeing a close up of nature's finest. You captured this brilliantly. Love, Shar
Wilson Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Roses can do that! Thanks.
Strand Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Raul.Rgds Brian
Reynolds Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 2:00 AM
A beautiful picture here of the beauty, love, Kristin
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