Sandra Haight Poet Tanka

Intermission

dark blue curtain falls
the long act comes to an end
players take their break…

to snack on dreams and slumber
till dawn signals curtain time.


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved

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~8th Place~
Contest: One New Tanka
Sponsor: Rick Parise
Judged: 04/07/2015

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Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2015 at 7:38 PM :):):) Linda

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 2:36 PM Nice win Sandra, always & forever ~LINDA~ Sandra Haight April 18, 2015 at 3:36 PM Once again, thank you, Linda. :) Sandra

Skat A April 18, 2015 at 12:18 PM Sandra:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT Sandra Haight April 18, 2015 at 3:36 PM Hi Skat, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Really appreciate it! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2015 at 12:02 AM big congrats to you on your win, dear! Sandra Haight April 10, 2015 at 8:22 PM Thank you, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra

Tammy Reams April 8, 2015 at 7:38 PM Congrats on your win! Love the audience. Sandra Haight April 10, 2015 at 8:23 PM So nice of you to stop by with your nice comment and congrats, Tammy. Really appreciate it! Sandra

Carrie Richards April 7, 2015 at 6:14 PM Applause from the audience !!! Lovely take for a tanka !! Congratulations Sandra! Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:43 PM Hi Carrie, thank you so much! I appreciate your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra

Faye Gibson April 7, 2015 at 6:05 PM Very lovely, Sandra. I really like this one. Congratulations. Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:42 PM Hi Faye, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra

Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on this wonderful win. Blessings dear friend Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:41 PM Thanks again, Eve. I appreciate your congratulations and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM A 7 for this visionary poem and a fav. Blessings eve Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:39 PM Thank you so much, Eve. So nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and support. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM Very creative winning work..Way to go..Thanks for the visit by with congrats..Sara Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:40 PM Thank you, Sara! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless April 7, 2015 at 4:26 PM WOW....I really like this one Sandra, it carries a simple mystique into the beautifully smooth juxtaposition. A 7 for sure, at least in my book. Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 7:38 PM Hi John, thank you so much for your encouraging comment and support. I really appreciate it. Sandra

Kim Shaw April 7, 2015 at 10:25 AM Congratulations Sandra on a nice win! Hugs, Kimberly Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 3:11 PM Thank you so much, Kimberly. I so much appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Sandra

Joseph May April 7, 2015 at 8:59 AM "All the world's a stage"...Congrats on a great win Sandra Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 3:12 PM Joseph, thank you so much. I really appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Sandra

David Mohn April 2, 2015 at 9:37 AM how unique and original...lovely Sandra Sandra Haight April 7, 2015 at 3:13 PM Thank you so much, David. I so much appreciate your stopping by with your postive comment. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2015 at 6:02 PM That is an interesting thought, snacking on dreams!! Metaphorical tanka!! (I am not sure, but I think Rick does not capitalize his first words in each line, so you might be wise to do the same!) Sandra Haight March 31, 2015 at 6:25 PM Thanks so much, Andrea...will fix it. Thanks for stopping by! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison March 31, 2015 at 5:31 PM beautifully penned Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight April 1, 2015 at 7:10 PM Hi Jan, once again, thank you so much for your nice comment and support. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France March 31, 2015 at 1:20 PM Sandra, this is a beautifully dark and deep tanka for the contest, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in. . . Sandra Haight April 1, 2015 at 7:11 PM Thank you, BW, so nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra