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Interlude

Interlude, brief and profound,
Where echoes of existence softly resound,
In this quiet chamber, dreams take flight,
A moment to ponder, in the tranquil night.

In the realm of love, where hearts may grow weary, 
An interlude of space makes the bond less dreary. 
Through quiet reflection and understanding gained, 
We rekindle the flame, with love unchained.

Amid challenges, when thoughts seem unclear, 
An interlude allows for clarity to appear. 
With a mind at ease and emotions set free, 
We face the world's puzzles with a fresh decree.

As the sun dips low, painting skies with hues, 
Interlude whispers secrets, ancient and true. 
A bridge between echoes, a pause to contemplate, 
An interval of stillness, before the day's fate.
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Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:26 AM
- A beautiful poem, Jay :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
La France Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Jay, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture/quote. Have a blessed day writing away............
Sharma  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 3:10 AM
This is such a profound and deep poem that reflects introspective thoughts upon the present, depicting it as an interlude! The wordplay and the rhymes in this piece are so beautiful.. Especially I love the lines "As the sun dips low, painting skies with hues" "Interlude whispers secrets, ancient and true", "Interlude, brief and profound"," Where echoes of existence softly resound" A brilliant write!
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:15 PM
If distance strengthens affection, the lingering whispers of love will forever resound. Exceptional literary prowess, Jay. Good luck with the contest
Situation Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Now I can trust you. To read and not get bored. And to say the writer just scored. and with each line my mind just soared.
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:12 AM
If absence makes the heart grow fonder, the echoes of love will always call out. Great writing, Jay.
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