Interchange

Skies fall, expect the weather change.
Look-see the atmosphere when strange.
Heads-up      for fate’s      rearrange.
Don’t blink, hearken an abrupt change;
For water’s deep…home on the range.
Earth’s       writhing in      interchange.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Flowed very well....you do very well. <3
Rolland Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:13 AM
enjoyed the music and creativity, yann
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Yann!
blegh Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Very creative poem dearest Kim, a fav for me.. this is wonderful
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Thank you very much, Peonieslore!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 8:38 AM
There seems to be a lot of bad weather around. Still loved your monorhyme.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 8:59 AM
We had that awful hurricane. It was devastating to some areas. Safe here.
Greenhough Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:09 PM
This is deep. I look forward to the wild gales that will usher in the colder weather. Today, it's still a waiting game.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:02 PM
I am looking forward to the cooler weather :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 11:58 AM
Powerful words, Kim, woven into powerful imagery - "earth's writhing." So many are suffering right now. Thank you for this poem and for thinking about the victims of Helene. Sending you many blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 1:32 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Few words with much said. Water is powerful. I remember my dad opened the car door/water came out after a big storm. It is No fun.... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:04 AM
I feel for those impacted by the hurricane!
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