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Intercession

Languidly I walk Trying so hard to be brave Darkness smells my grief -- Until heaven lights the cloud Fulfilling endless prayer. Jan 10, 2019 Contest Hosted by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/11/2019 10:06:00 AM
ohh, when it is time, a plea is answered....beautiful! congrats on your top spot, amelie..
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Date: 1/11/2019 12:48:00 AM
Beautiful, Amelie. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:08:00 PM
Amelie, the grief you describe seems palatable only because of your endless praying. A gorgeous tanka. Good luck in the contest.
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