Intentions

I meant to call you,
But I am so forgetful.
Friendship is fragile.
Gardens that are neglected
Dry out in the summer sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mckenzie Avatar
October 7, 2008 at 12:19 PM
UMM well thought out little Tanka great write good luck with the contest! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
October 7, 2008 at 10:45 AM
Very insightful! Yes...friendship needs tending, just as a garden would need tender care. We often take friendship for granted...and that can lead to drifting apart. Good advice here! ~Carrie
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