William Gomes Poet Rhyme

Intended For Attention

To me a person, is defined by there intention. 
And girl, your just fine, but you insist on the attention. 
Yea life is gonna' suck, when "sucks" your definition.
And honestly, and obviously, you're something that I'd mention.

You see, sadly, I don't mention a lot...
And hardly do I ever mention things I do not got...
But baby, did I mention, that I did this on the spot,
So I didn't think of much, but I thought of you a lot...

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Skat A June 5, 2016 at 9:37 PM WILLIAM, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*

Audrey Haick January 17, 2011 at 1:58 PM Welcome to PS, William! I am sure you will enjoy it here. I understand that you wrote this on the spot so will overlook your "intentional going against the grain" lol You were after a special effect...letting her know that you're thinking about her more than other things! Hope I'm right.. if not forgive me. Always, Annalise

Robert Pettit January 17, 2011 at 12:08 PM Despite the few spelling and grammar flaws, this is an entertaining little piece of rhyme.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 4:31 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup William. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 16, 2011 at 6:56 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..