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Intangible

Walking past a river there lies the ruins In the center is a shrine of copper The guardians are ghosts of future Made of intangible blues, but then before you realize that these humans sing You only hear the sound of admission ring Ears cannot go a day without madness unless one hears the song of ghostly hymn so you travel back to the copper wreck to understand the song of admission then looking down to your shoes which now are made of intangible blues...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 10:18:00 PM
RYAN,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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