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Insult To Injury

her cold crimson corpse

into the heart that loved him . . .

he now twists the knife


Written 4/9/15 by Andrea Dietrich
For the Get Your Senryu On Poetry Contest of Judy Konos

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Monterey Sirak

April 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM

Wow! Powerful!

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 5:05 PM

Andrea, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 15, 2015 at 8:04 PM

that's excruciating Andie!!~olive eloisa

Mohan Chutani

April 13, 2015 at 10:33 AM

sounds very painful, even for a corpse. Andrea, congrats for a top win. Mohan

Sharon Edwards

April 12, 2015 at 10:53 PM

great write. Thanks for the comment and unfortunately it is true.

Poet Destroyer A

April 12, 2015 at 9:20 PM

Hello Andrea, thank you for the comment.. One of the original titles was Beauty and the beast, on my big foot poem.. LOL.. I'm going to use the title for a while... stopping by to say hi and thanks.. XOOL... senryu,..LINDA

Wilma Neels

April 12, 2015 at 10:28 AM

Awesome Andrea, congratulations on your win as well ;) hugs Wilma

Paul Callus

April 12, 2015 at 10:23 AM

Back with congrats on your win, Andrea! // paul

Tammy Reams

April 12, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea! I knew this one would be a win. I still love the picture. This would make a great tattoo.

Bl Devnath

April 12, 2015 at 2:53 AM

A great congrats on your win for this poem of excellence. An art beautifully colored. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Debbie Guzzi

April 11, 2015 at 7:37 PM

Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

Rob Carmack

April 11, 2015 at 5:19 PM

I love this, congrats. Hugs.

Richard Ferry

April 11, 2015 at 3:33 PM

A friend of yours? Congrats Richard

Joseph May

April 11, 2015 at 2:47 PM

A tale from the dark side...Congrats on your win Andrea

Jan Allison

April 11, 2015 at 9:50 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea I really enjoyed this one:-) Hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

April 11, 2015 at 9:49 AM

How does that song go? "Nobody does it better"...That's you Andrea!

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 7:47 AM

Dark with severe intent, nice Andrea, my kinda poetry, smiles, James :)

Charmaine Chircop

April 11, 2015 at 4:12 AM

There are many ways for one to betray love.There could be the physical,emotional and mental aspect.All hurt the same.What a heartless bugger.A deep dark senryu.