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Instinctive Critter

Stalking,.....waits awhile She inhales the woodland airs..... Animals beware...... Nose to tail the vixen stares....... Fixated,....... her prey beguiles.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/29/2014 2:04:00 PM
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Quite a compelling poem, Theresa! It captivates the reader and makes us wonder which specie of animal is "fixated" and ready to pounce on the next prey. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
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Hi Carolyn, So kind of you to take the time to read and I am very pleased you found this poem to your liking. It is a vixen fox who is 'fixated'. The prey, it could only be a bunny rabbit, aaah.... Big hug for your wonderful comments. Regards Theresa xx
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 4/27/2014 6:51:00 PM
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As does your poem. Beguile, that is. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:27:00 AM
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Hi Joyce, Thank you for reading and so pleased to receive your lovely comments. All the best, Theresa xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/27/2014 6:48:00 PM
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I really do like this, seeing it a second time and wishing you a big congrats.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:30:00 AM
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Hi Andrea, I appreciate your, very welcome, positive comments. Regards Theresa xx
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/27/2014 7:12:00 AM
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A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Theresa
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:32:00 AM
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Hi Ram, Thank you for reading and for your supportive comments. All the best, Theresa xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/27/2014 2:09:00 AM
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Great write Theresa ! Very well painted pic ! Congrats on great win !
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:34:00 AM
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So pleased you enjoyed reading it and for your support. Regards Theresa xx
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/27/2014 1:47:00 AM
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Theresa,, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:43:00 AM
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Hi Linda, Thank you for reading and I am most grateful to receive your very kind supportive comments. Regards Theresa xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2014 6:10:00 PM
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good one here too!!
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Jack Horne
Date: 4/12/2014 3:57:00 PM
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powerful write - love it
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/28/2014 4:44:00 AM
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Hi Jack, Good of you to visit with your lovely comments. Regards, Theresa xx

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