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Instinctive Critter

Stalking,.....waits awhile

She inhales the woodland airs.....

Animals beware......

Nose to tail the vixen stares.......

Fixated,....... her prey beguiles.....

Copyright © Theresa Stephens | Year Posted 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/29/2014 2:04:00 PM Quite a compelling poem, Theresa! It captivates the reader and makes us wonder which specie of animal is "fixated" and ready to pounce on the next prey. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/29/2014 2:42:00 PM Hi Carolyn, So kind of you to take the time to read and I am very pleased you found this poem to your liking. It is a vixen fox who is 'fixated'. The prey, it could only be a bunny rabbit, aaah.... Big hug for your wonderful comments. Regards Theresa xx

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/27/2014 6:51:00 PM As does your poem. Beguile, that is. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:27:00 AM Hi Joyce, Thank you for reading and so pleased to receive your lovely comments. All the best, Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/27/2014 6:48:00 PM I really do like this, seeing it a second time and wishing you a big congrats. Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:30:00 AM Hi Andrea, I appreciate your, very welcome, positive comments. Regards Theresa xx

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/27/2014 7:12:00 AM A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Theresa Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:32:00 AM Hi Ram, Thank you for reading and for your supportive comments. All the best, Theresa xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/27/2014 2:09:00 AM Great write Theresa ! Very well painted pic ! Congrats on great win ! Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:34:00 AM So pleased you enjoyed reading it and for your support. Regards Theresa xx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/27/2014 1:47:00 AM Theresa,, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:43:00 AM Hi Linda, Thank you for reading and I am most grateful to receive your very kind supportive comments. Regards Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/21/2014 6:10:00 PM good one here too!! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/12/2014 3:57:00 PM powerful write - love it Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 4/28/2014 4:44:00 AM Hi Jack, Good of you to visit with your lovely comments. Regards, Theresa xx