Funom Makama Poet Epic

Instinct Under a Dangerous Tease

Ripe, fresh, new and tender are names she should bear.
I am 17, she’s 16, both alone and innocent
in a partially illuminated room.
She possesses while seated,
expanding hips, lines of fleshy diversions,
small dark shadows and shades of secrecy- what a bodily landscape!

Crossed and well catered thighs, partly covered by a mini
the fatal bullets of lust are triggered by this tempting feminine shape.
Pumping emotions, just flowing like rolls of textiles
so lengthy that it cannot be measured by any tape.

Changing sitting position causes a flash of her underwear,
stimulating powerful focus like a longing ape.
And rapid chemistry-change from the signals of my sight,
produces great salivation already tasting like grape.

The heat of the moment fights morality and ego
with a telegram in the mind centered on rape.
But my reputation has already gone into oblivion
so what’s left of my honour, I’ll not scrape.

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Skat A December 2, 2015 at 11:17 PM well done.... lOVE Skat Funom Makama January 28, 2016 at 10:59 AM Thank you SKAT A

Judy Konos November 18, 2015 at 4:17 PM Excellent... Funom Makama November 23, 2015 at 5:35 AM Thank you so much Judy Konos

Afolabi Muideen November 11, 2015 at 3:30 PM What an emotive write my friend, this was constructed beautiful..........A.M. Funom Makama November 23, 2015 at 5:34 AM Thank u so much Afolabi

Duke Beaufort November 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM Yes, very well put. The ability we have to control ourselves is an important part of who we are. We all know those who are lacking this trait, and we try to avoid them. I have seen the damage they can do. Lives can be ruined in a second. Funom Makama November 23, 2015 at 5:34 AM Yes Duke... Thank you very much

Cecilia Macfarlane November 4, 2015 at 4:07 PM You captured the raging hormones and racing minds of a smitten teenager very keenly. Well done! Hugs Funom Makama November 23, 2015 at 5:33 AM thank you very much Cecilia Macfarlane

Julia Ward November 2, 2015 at 7:28 AM You can get rid of the repeated Afolabi's by going to "My Outboxes", then you can correct the boxes by thanking us, using our correct names.

Phyllis Babcock November 1, 2015 at 12:07 PM A well penned poem on the thoughts and feeling of a teenager while eyeing up the opposite sex. God Bless phyl Funom Makama November 2, 2015 at 4:45 AM Thank you so much Phyllis Babcock

Julia Ward November 1, 2015 at 8:46 AM You have called us all Afolabi! Funom Makama November 2, 2015 at 4:44 AM I am sure it was a technical mix up on poetry soup. I didnt even reply other comments, twas just on Afolabi's own, then when I pressed "submit" it took over 7 minutes to load and submit.. Then it logged out. I had to log in to discover this.. Sorry for the embarrassment Julia

Afolabi Muideen November 1, 2015 at 1:24 AM A great poem you penned Funom. The flow of your brilliant write depicted imagery size the attention of this reader through the whole read. A beautiful and excellent write.........A.M. Funom Makama November 1, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you very much Afolabi.....

Cherl Dunn October 30, 2015 at 7:44 PM Dear Funom I agree with the silent one on this one interesting poem, and thanks for your comment on my poem also, have a happy halloween, cheri Funom Makama November 1, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you very much Afolabi.....

Don Johnson October 30, 2015 at 4:19 PM Ah to be 17 again, with the knowledge of now. great poetry mate ... 7 for sure Funom Makama November 1, 2015 at 8:33 AM Thank you very much Afolabi.....

Ken Carroll October 30, 2015 at 3:33 PM well penned my friend! Funom Makama November 1, 2015 at 8:33 AM Thank you very much Afolabi.....

Julia Ward October 30, 2015 at 7:39 AM Epic indeed, with its emotional rush for the 17 year old. Your poem receives a big 7 from me. Julia Ward November 1, 2015 at 8:45 AM I am Julia, not Afolabi. Funom Makama November 1, 2015 at 8:34 AM Thank you very much Afolabi.....