Instinct Under a Dangerous Tease

Ripe, fresh, new and tender are names she should bear. I am 17, she’s 16, both alone and innocent in a partially illuminated room. She possesses while seated, expanding hips, lines of fleshy diversions, small dark shadows and shades of secrecy- what a bodily landscape! Crossed and well catered thighs, partly covered by a mini the fatal bullets of lust are triggered by this tempting feminine shape. Pumping emotions, just flowing like rolls of textiles so lengthy that it cannot be measured by any tape. Changing sitting position causes a flash of her underwear, stimulating powerful focus like a longing ape. And rapid chemistry-change from the signals of my sight, produces great salivation already tasting like grape. The heat of the moment fights morality and ego with a telegram in the mind centered on rape. But my reputation has already gone into oblivion so what’s left of my honour, I’ll not scrape.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/2/2015 11:17:00 PM
well done.... lOVE Skat
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you SKAT A
Date: 11/18/2015 4:17:00 PM
Excellent...
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Judy Konos
Date: 11/11/2015 3:30:00 PM
What an emotive write my friend, this was constructed beautiful..........A.M.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:34:00 AM
Thank u so much Afolabi
Date: 11/5/2015 8:52:00 AM
Yes, very well put. The ability we have to control ourselves is an important part of who we are. We all know those who are lacking this trait, and we try to avoid them. I have seen the damage they can do. Lives can be ruined in a second.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:34:00 AM
Yes Duke... Thank you very much
Date: 11/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
You captured the raging hormones and racing minds of a smitten teenager very keenly. Well done! Hugs
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:33:00 AM
thank you very much Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 11/2/2015 7:28:00 AM
You can get rid of the repeated Afolabi's by going to "My Outboxes", then you can correct the boxes by thanking us, using our correct names.
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Date: 11/1/2015 12:07:00 PM
A well penned poem on the thoughts and feeling of a teenager while eyeing up the opposite sex. God Bless phyl
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/2/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/1/2015 8:46:00 AM
You have called us all Afolabi!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/2/2015 4:44:00 AM
I am sure it was a technical mix up on poetry soup. I didnt even reply other comments, twas just on Afolabi's own, then when I pressed "submit" it took over 7 minutes to load and submit.. Then it logged out. I had to log in to discover this.. Sorry for the embarrassment Julia
Date: 11/1/2015 1:24:00 AM
A great poem you penned Funom. The flow of your brilliant write depicted imagery size the attention of this reader through the whole read. A beautiful and excellent write.........A.M.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi.....
Date: 10/30/2015 7:44:00 PM
Dear Funom I agree with the silent one on this one interesting poem, and thanks for your comment on my poem also, have a happy halloween, cheri
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi.....
Date: 10/30/2015 4:19:00 PM
Ah to be 17 again, with the knowledge of now. great poetry mate ... 7 for sure
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi.....
Date: 10/30/2015 3:33:00 PM
well penned my friend!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi.....
Date: 10/30/2015 7:39:00 AM
Epic indeed, with its emotional rush for the 17 year old. Your poem receives a big 7 from me.
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Julia Ward
Date: 11/1/2015 8:45:00 AM
I am Julia, not Afolabi.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi.....
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