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Instinct To Kill

a spermatozoa competition for there is an ovum to won so they race to fertilize and fight until they're left only one

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2013 1:55:00 PM

Those strong swimmers make it to the top ensuring strong healthy babies so it seems but then things do come with those healthy sperm sometimes sad to say..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2013 1:54:00 PM

Hello Shirley, lol..... guess I won in this race cuz, I'm here... love it.... PD

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/15/2013 11:03:00 AM

You gave me a whole new perspective with this one my dear.Very nice!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/14/2013 3:58:00 PM

Well, I'm glad my little Zoa won the race (Those other little Zoas didn't stand a chance) It's good to be alive!...Funny stuff Shirley! - Tim

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/13/2013 1:27:00 PM

It does seem like a strange process. How is it that this brings us too life? There are references to it in "Legally Blonde" and in Woody Allen's film "Sleeper" if I have the right film. Biology brings in some strange bedfellows.

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/13/2013 2:12:00 PM

Duke..!! thank you for dropped by and leave a comment. I adore your limericks ^____^

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/12/2013 10:10:00 PM

This was a hell of a perspective on the creation process. lol Nice, PS! :)

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/15/2013 10:37:00 AM

Hee hee. No worries. ;-)

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/13/2013 12:09:00 AM

scary* ~typo (just woke up...lol)

Shirley Candy
Date: 7/12/2013 11:51:00 PM

a bit cary to think about how people have the instinct to kill even before they are formed as embryos...lol..glad u like it, DD ;)