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Instinct Problematic -

As owls to oaks I know you, in ancient springs,ravines and sunlit scenes, persistently pushing passions and hushing lovings, my immoratal instinct allowed to blossom in terrestrial precincts, combined with you vulnerability is a prospect I render to the wicked, salt is for sins, as sand is for sundown reparations, with undefiled freedom wonders fly on winds and no beast can deny my wins with you over fears by the years, phobias of mean faces, painful places and shadows of my core crooked, You are my star and I am your shine, the mountains we climb, how strongly we do - J.A.B.

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Adeyemi Joshua

Date: 8/13/2017 3:33:00 PM

Indeed a great poem....Well written!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/15/2017 6:49:00 PM

Perseverance and faith in Providence are great things indeed Adeyemi...J.A.B.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/14/2014 6:23:00 PM

Wow you started out strong, and closed up perfectly, even the middle was intensely delicious, well done.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/14/2014 8:34:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, I like being delicious, and dreamy. This poem is to celebrate Divine Inspirstion in concert with Will Power. Just gotta keep persevering...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/26/2013 6:43:00 PM

''As owls to oaks I know you''... is it possible to know one so well? That line alone is powerful - I won't go on to say ho much more powerful the following lines are. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/27/2013 2:10:00 PM

They support each other very nicely - you can know as much as you are capable of knowing my friend - I appreciate your kindness Laura - J.A.B. %

Karen Deeks

Date: 10/8/2012 3:06:00 PM

How amazing is it when you join the one who frees your soul, uplifts your spirit and frees you to realms you have always desired but never dared expect to tread ... a gorgeous write of substance and one i feel lucky enough to say..... i know that liberation

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/8/2012 7:19:00 PM

Your wisdom is beautifully displayed in the response you have graced me with Karen - the One I've joined is the Almighty, appreciating on a more lucid level the blessings of triumph and failure - J.A.B. %

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/20/2012 8:14:00 PM

Wonderful words. I was quite captivated by this one. Keep climbing that mountain and keep up the wonderful work as a poet. By the way, I sent you a soupmail - hope you got it. With respect, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/5/2012 11:51:00 PM

I can see the summit Laura, and my Guardian Angel is still in my corner - I appreciate your encouragement my friend - J.A.B. %

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2012 11:54:00 PM

aweee...Justin,,, thank you for the heartfelt comment.. it means a lot to me... xox~pd

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/13/2012 8:15:00 PM

Sweet women deserve sweet respect PD. - I am grateful to know your work - J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2012 11:51:00 PM

Justin, it all adds up.... your feelings are beautiful... hope to hear from you soon... god night...pd

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/13/2012 8:16:00 PM

I couldn't ignore you even if I was dumb enough to try PD.!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2012 1:48:00 PM

A interesting written poem, very well written Justin. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/9/2012 10:26:00 PM

Its all about respecting Life Anne, thanks! J.A.B.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/9/2012 4:52:00 AM

Hi Justin; You have great imagination here. Good work. Thanks for visiting my Cross Roads. Thanks also for sharing this poem with us. Lucilla

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/9/2012 10:24:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words Lucilla - the pleasure is all mine - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 9:23:00 PM

You have some great images in this poem. My favorite line: you are my star and I am your shine!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/9/2012 10:22:00 PM

That is my favorite line too - I thank Deity!!! Thank you very much for feeling & caring Andrea - J.A.B.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/7/2012 11:49:00 AM

A very strong opening to this write, Justin! "As owls to oaks, I know you"...their wisdom is profound, I'm sure! I think that anything you write will be done with passion and zeal! You 'shine' onto the heads and into the hearts of many, Justin...we are blessed by your thoughts and warmth.:) Best wishes! Mikki

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/7/2012 6:26:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend - in a world of cold hearts you are a conflagration! J.A.B.