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Instability

hasten feat —
the shortcut, worthwhile?
pay the price,
when you fall…
instead clear the land, plant seeds —
narrow way succeeds

1/23/2022

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

January 31, 2022 at 6:51 AM

"pay the price, when you fall…" We often do. Sadly.

January 31, 2022 at 8:16 AM

Especially when we try to hurry success!

Jennifer Proxenos

January 26, 2022 at 11:58 AM

Nothing is ever achieved in a human life without determination and hard work, as well as honesty and loyalty, and you say it all in this fine write Kim my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

January 26, 2022 at 2:04 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Joseph P. DiMino

January 26, 2022 at 8:44 AM

For sure, slow, methodical and deliberately steady is best in the long run. No substitute for hard, honest work. Well said!

January 26, 2022 at 10:14 AM

Thank you, Joe!

January 26, 2022 at 6:12 AM

Kim, this is a stunningly done shadorma that is both insightful and delightful to look at. Kindest regards

January 26, 2022 at 10:14 AM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 25, 2022 at 8:05 PM

Kim, this is a beautifully executed shadorma, containing wisdom and delight. :)

January 26, 2022 at 10:12 AM

Thank you, Evelyn!

January 25, 2022 at 6:47 PM

Quite a feat, this shadorma. The feet have now had their say. :)

January 25, 2022 at 7:11 PM

Hmm..perhaps…perhaps…(chin stroke)

Dennis Spilchuk

January 25, 2022 at 5:30 PM

Proverbial wisdom; a cleverly written Shadorma.

January 25, 2022 at 7:11 PM

Thank you, Dennis!

Victor Buhagiar

January 24, 2022 at 1:51 AM

Much work is needed to achieve a grand flowerbed. Hugs.

January 24, 2022 at 6:11 AM

Too true and so with life! ~ hygs

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