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hasten feat — the shortcut, worthwhile? pay the price, when you fall… instead clear the land, plant seeds — narrow way succeeds 1/23/2022

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Date: 1/31/2022 6:51:00 AM
"pay the price, when you fall…" We often do. Sadly.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2022 8:16:00 AM
Especially when we try to hurry success!
Date: 1/26/2022 11:58:00 AM
Nothing is ever achieved in a human life without determination and hard work, as well as honesty and loyalty, and you say it all in this fine write Kim my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 1/26/2022 8:44:00 AM
For sure, slow, methodical and deliberately steady is best in the long run. No substitute for hard, honest work. Well said!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 1/26/2022 6:12:00 AM
Kim, this is a stunningly done shadorma that is both insightful and delightful to look at. Kindest regards
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 1/25/2022 8:05:00 PM
Kim, this is a beautifully executed shadorma, containing wisdom and delight. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2022 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 1/25/2022 6:47:00 PM
Quite a feat, this shadorma. The feet have now had their say. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2022 7:11:00 PM
Hmm..perhaps…perhaps…(chin stroke)
Date: 1/25/2022 5:30:00 PM
Proverbial wisdom; a cleverly written Shadorma.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2022 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Dennis!
Date: 1/24/2022 1:51:00 AM
Much work is needed to achieve a grand flowerbed. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2022 6:11:00 AM
Too true and so with life! ~ hygs

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