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At the edge of shafts, you quested for calmness. In a Utopia, we whimsey you survived a slash witness. I swung the specific option to guzzle your unhappiness. I wiped my knuckles to remove the pleasantness. Weakness has instantly made my mouth swell across. Such a blood clot, they plied to moan voiceless. Supposing we're neutral with ourselves on sharpness. Concepts might not have evolved this grotesqueness. How can I be heedful, or may I eagerly shred my kindness? Nothing would delight me further than to live harmless.

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Date: 12/26/2021 6:39:00 AM
One might be impartial and do neither good nor bad. But I feel God loves more those who do good. Lovely poem though.
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Date: 12/26/2021 4:48:00 AM
Inspiring thoughts resonate throughout, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/25/2021 7:09:00 PM
To live without harm would be a blessing, to do good is a blessing in itself.
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Date: 12/25/2021 6:06:00 PM
Even if one cannot to do any act of goodness, if one can live without doing any harm to others, that itself is a great thing . Great thoughts, Lasaad !
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