Inspired By Some Interesting Poems

I read a sonnet, found it interesting,
The form is best used for proclaiming love
but this held naught about the joys of spring
or of that fondness fitting like a glove.
Instead it dwelt on questions beyond ken,
eternal strife does not begin or end.
As women stand one side, the other men,
Can from the mire a victory ascend?

There is a love that asks for no return,
a giving thing that seeks another's good.
But as the giver's heart is left to yearn
the sacrifice is oft' misunderstood.

'Tis Godliness to give without receipt
to help another stand upon their feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 7:29 PM
A profound and well-written Sonnet, Keith. It reminds me of a Sonnet I wrote and posted a poem that speaks somewhat of the same emotions you write about, titled, 'Give and Take'. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Sandra
Logan Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:44 PM
I have spent an enjoyable time reading over your poetry. Thank you for your kind comment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 2:32 PM
I agree with Rick well done.
Logan Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Thank you also, glad to have made a connection.
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Well said!
Logan Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Thank you, it is heartfelt.
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