Inspired By Debbie Guzzie's Sonnet March Goosebumps

March brushes past us, in its blustery haste

And we, who stand where Winter’s chill once laid waste,

Watch in awe, the breath of Spring ignite the earth.

Around cold Winter’s girth, warm Spring wraps its mirth.

We know, after every death, there is rebirth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Darby Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Beautiful words and use, I am going to recite this poem at a 'Poetry for Pleasure' meeting at my local library in Brixham, Devon, UK on Tuesday. We meet each month and write/recite poems on a selected theme, this month it is 'Spring', you can recite a poem that you have written yourself or from another author or both.
Dom Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Arrgh! Darby not Debbie. Me duh - not quite awake yet!
Dom Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Oh wow! What a distinct honor Debbie! Ha, ha that is utter glory! I can't wait to tell my partner and number me fan - she'll be more ecstatic than I am, likely! Thank you for giving me this very warm ear to ear grin on a cool winter morning in Adelaide Australia.
Guzzi Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Congrad's Michael! Light & love
Dom Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:58 AM
:-)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 8:12 AM
How true! Awesome write worth top win Michael! Congrats! !
Dom Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Thanks&cheers. I am liking your entry in nette onclaud's Just Ten Lines contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this is Awesome five lines!! congrats on your well deserved win.
Dom Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Andrea, cheers&thanks
Walker  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Beautifully written Michael. Verlena
Dom Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Thanks&cheers Verlana.
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Hi Michael, congrats on this fine win; very merited. high rated poem; very enjoyable. // paul
Dom Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Paul, so glad to have you reading my work. thanks&cheers.
A  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Nice Win Michael, hugs... SKAT
Dom Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:06 PM
hug back. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:55 AM
you are fired up for spring and this is a wonderful poem that her poetry inspired in you. WELL done!!
Dom Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:06 PM
:-)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 7:42 AM
This is very good! Favorite line "Watch in awe, the breath of Spring ignite the earth."
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Cheers&Thanks Richard.
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