Insomnia

Sleep. Eyes closed in restful dream filled slumber, life put on hold while body lies tranquil. Oh to have such pleasure at the days end! For this I wish, but I can only dream! Brian Strand's contest 'FORM OR FREE UPTO THEE' 6th place

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Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2011 6:27:00 PM

Spent several years like that. I can feel your pain. Great job here. God Bless, JB

George Aul

Date: 6/30/2011 10:37:00 AM

A very restful poem, I like your words..... thanks for the comment.......George

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations Emma on your win in Brian Strand's "Form Or Free Up To Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 6:20:00 PM

oh,my, you showed very well your longing for sweet restful sleep. No wonder this won a place in the contest. it's excellent,Emma. Congrats in Brian's contest.

Elaine George

Date: 6/24/2011 9:58:00 AM

Awesome Tetractys, Emma. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Elaine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congrats Emma on this expressive entry winning in the contest luv.. I can so relate.. I am an insomniac of sorts..always writing poetry..haha..enjoy luv..