Insolent Time

Oh Thief, my hands crave to make love with the gentleness of earth’s soil or bathe in a day's hours, lapping a wind: yet your insolent pendulum snatches my need to savor the last parade of autumn flowers ... leaving me wrought with pain as the hourglass breaks my bones while you move to render me helpless. Screwed 1X Contest Sponsor: rob carmack 11/8/2015

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Date: 12/26/2015 7:38:00 PM
Yes, time is a thief, Nette. Excellent poem, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sanddra
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:20:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:18:00 PM
Oh I SO feel that way about damned time too, Nette. VERY well done. LOVE it, and congrats in rob's contest.
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:50:00 AM
Though mine is somewhat 'funny', this reminds me of my "Time Clock Strain" poem - you might like it. Couldn't we write and write about time? I truly enjoy this emotional poem about time robbing us ... CayCay
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:45:00 AM
Wow, I am just back from Paris, and loved this, The poem could be take a leave or take a leaf! One can feel the melancholy here, and I just loved this poem!
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:26:00 PM
The fist lines immediately held my attention.. I could not help but be taken through a journey of time's frustrating, fleeting moments, though personal to you, made universal through your outstanding poetry.
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Date: 11/8/2015 1:01:00 PM
- Oh, beautiful as always - Good luck in the contest,Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:04:00 AM
This resonates with me; whenever I am having a joyful moment, the hours run so fast. You found depth and the right mood by showing how disappointing time can be through this top-rate poem!
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:00:00 AM
This resonates with me; whenever I am having a joyful moment, the hours run so fast. You found depth and the right mood by showing how disappointing time can be through this top-rate poem!
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Date: 11/8/2015 2:50:00 AM
What a poetic plea and beauty of expression, dear nette! Good luck with a seven!
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