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Insipid Existence

On her front porch, the elderly lady stood
Sending forth a farewell starts with a wave
Wait for the tires to be silent in the woods
The sound faded on the stones of the stave.

She waits for the family car to fade from sight
Clouds of dust gradually drifted below
due to the air's propensity to wash right
Her son, wife, and child care for a cozy forego.

It breathed fresh life into this calm place
afar from the hectic pace of this crazy world
She had faith that there would be more chances
Other dainty events, but not akin to the one named.

What we retain is most crucial than what we read
It's not our intent but the actions that lend us deeds
We don't achieve our goals by wishing for them
But it is a lifelong fight to render us a valiant gem.

She expected tears, but she had a sole wish
She may cook the last bit and serve them a dish
Hear the tires screech and watch the dust settle
Over the span of her life, view her blooming petals.

Written: April 24, 2023

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Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2023 at 8:59 AM A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away................

Yann Rolland April 25, 2023 at 7:36 AM beautiful penning, a crazy world, as you write , thanks for the elegant imagery take care

Vijay Pandit April 25, 2023 at 5:05 AM Though solitude hurts--we gain wisdom as we age. Much to gleam from her thoughts.

Joanna Daniel April 25, 2023 at 4:52 AM Great tale of farewell to loved ones, hoping for their visit once again, Sotto:)

Valsa George April 25, 2023 at 4:25 AM "It's not our intent but the actions that lend us deeds/ We don't achieve our goals by wishing for them/ But it is a lifelong fight to render us a valiant gem." Rightly said, dear Lasaad. Admire the lady and her attitude. Another beautiful poem.

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 4:18 AM Ahh!! I feel the emotion of this woman who sees her family leave her alone once again but has hopes of their visiting soon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2023 at 3:26 AM A delightful poem that is a pleasure to read Wondrous imagery, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 24, 2023 at 8:20 PM Lasaad, I enjoyed reading this well wrought tale of love and its rewards. So beautifully written. :)

David Mchattie April 24, 2023 at 4:34 PM A lovely poem about a lady who knows the value of giving her time and energy. The only true joy in life comes when we are of service to others. Have a great day my friend.