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On her front porch, the elderly lady stood Sending forth a farewell starts with a wave Wait for the tires to be silent in the woods The sound faded on the stones of the stave. She waits for the family car to fade from sight Clouds of dust gradually drifted below due to the air's propensity to wash right Her son, wife, and child care for a cozy forego. It breathed fresh life into this calm place afar from the hectic pace of this crazy world She had faith that there would be more chances Other dainty events, but not akin to the one named. What we retain is most crucial than what we read It's not our intent but the actions that lend us deeds We don't achieve our goals by wishing for them But it is a lifelong fight to render us a valiant gem. She expected tears, but she had a sole wish She may cook the last bit and serve them a dish Hear the tires screech and watch the dust settle Over the span of her life, view her blooming petals.
Written: April 24, 2023

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Date: 4/25/2023 8:59:00 AM
A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 4/25/2023 7:36:00 AM
beautiful penning, a crazy world, as you write , thanks for the elegant imagery take care
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Date: 4/25/2023 5:05:00 AM
Though solitude hurts--we gain wisdom as we age. Much to gleam from her thoughts.
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Date: 4/25/2023 4:52:00 AM
Great tale of farewell to loved ones, hoping for their visit once again, Sotto:)
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Date: 4/25/2023 4:25:00 AM
"It's not our intent but the actions that lend us deeds/ We don't achieve our goals by wishing for them/ But it is a lifelong fight to render us a valiant gem." Rightly said, dear Lasaad. Admire the lady and her attitude. Another beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/25/2023 4:18:00 AM
Ahh!! I feel the emotion of this woman who sees her family leave her alone once again but has hopes of their visiting soon. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/25/2023 3:26:00 AM
A delightful poem that is a pleasure to read Wondrous imagery, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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Date: 4/24/2023 8:20:00 PM
Lasaad, I enjoyed reading this well wrought tale of love and its rewards. So beautifully written. :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 4:34:00 PM
A lovely poem about a lady who knows the value of giving her time and energy. The only true joy in life comes when we are of service to others. Have a great day my friend.
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