Insight

My prickly rose is dropping bush
And what a litter of dead mass
It leaves the bright emotions hush
And wary of the winsome wasp
But there is a bud quickening sun
And a gentle rain to come
After the butterflies take their fun
O give one thorn its ransome.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 7, 2012 at 9:19 PM
David, its prickly but beautiful..pd
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