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Inside the Mirror

Inside The Mirror Mirrors are the biggest liars in our world, You don’t want to look at them when you are old. I will break everyone; they show an old man, The man that was full of youth, as some have told. Can you see what was there? Now, all it is gone. There is no more fire in life; it’s just cold. Tell me, what do you see when you look at me? A pile of rust that was once as good as gold. I wish my mirror is showing what it was, Now is too late, and I’m too old to behold. What is this life that you don’t know who you are? Until you wanted more when gone, and it’s sold. I sold my youth for what? Some bricks and now pain, Tell me “Haloo” how this journey will unfold. 4/2/18 Haloo The Painting is called Inside the Mirror or Reflections. It is acrylic on canvas. This Poem is in the form of a Ghazal without refrain with 11 syllables in each line. The rhyming of Ghazal is always aA, bA, cA, dA, eA etc.

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Date: 10/27/2018 1:01:00 AM
Hi Pashang, young or old I cracked the mirror when I looked in it. Another excellent write from your pen. All that lies within the mirror is me. If beauty comes from the soul then your image shall forever shine. Loved the read my friend. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/5/2018 2:47:00 AM
Indeed... Thanks Mike.
Date: 5/8/2018 6:30:00 PM
"Youth I adore, age I abhor"! Quoting Shakespeare, I dare say : age I venerate! An insightful, unique piece of work. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Stay blessed.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:53:00 PM
Thanks for stopping my dear... Always welcome..
Date: 4/25/2018 8:23:00 PM
Hello Passang, the mirror will always tell us the truth of how we se ourselves. have a nice evening my friend.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/26/2018 1:23:00 AM
Thanks you too...
Date: 4/23/2018 2:25:00 AM
A Poem for all centuries or as long as mankind exists. Language no barrier to the meaning in this. Glad you did not try make it better. Perfect way it is Pashang. Best regards David in NZ
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/24/2018 2:14:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 4/21/2018 6:33:00 AM
In the mirror is both the young and the old, the stories told and those untold. I have enjoyed your poem today Haloo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/21/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you my dear...
Date: 4/9/2018 6:55:00 PM
As long as I avoid reflective surfaces I will blissfully feel the joys of being young. I enjoyed your poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 1:38:00 PM
thank you Sir...
Date: 4/9/2018 9:22:00 AM
It does get harder to look in the mirror, but that should not be where we find our beauty, it comes from the inside, and I think you have this in abundance. Love your poem, and the painting.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 1:38:00 PM
You're so kind Becca...As matter a fact I am doing a painting called inside out..
Date: 4/8/2018 5:03:00 AM
Hello Pashang, This is a most excellent poem and A FAVE in my book!! What really lies in the depth of any mirror, may indeed reflect things each of us shall not ever want to really see. Again, a Superb Write!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Gary, you're such a wonderful friend...
Date: 4/7/2018 4:17:00 AM
Now if I was "the mirror", I would tell you "My dear Pashang, I see a beautiful Soul with in you, an inner beauty beyond compare, and a man who can depict his happiness on canvas". I love your poem, but I dont agree with this line 'A pile of rust that was once as good as gold'...Totally not true....Maria :).
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/7/2018 11:02:00 PM
My dear Maria, you are such a great friend... I might see you in Australia soon ....
Date: 4/6/2018 6:13:00 PM
a sad one, and it's the fate of all those who do not have the money for plastic surgery. hahaha. (woe is me). GREAT poem, Pashang.
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Date: 4/7/2018 11:00:00 PM
thank you Ms. Gazalier...
Date: 4/6/2018 5:23:00 AM
I would love to see the picture of you at 18 Pashang. Bald can also be beautiful.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 9:55:00 AM
Really?? I've had a look, and you are handsome my friend.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/6/2018 9:26:00 AM
LOL... Jean you always make me smile... You can always see my pictures on Facebook... Thanks
Date: 4/5/2018 1:46:00 PM
Lovely...both the poem and the painting, Pashang. The painting reminds me of the beauty of youth! Aging can be camouflaged for a while, but never defeated! Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2018 7:57:00 PM
Paul..You're such a wise man.. Thank you ..
Date: 4/4/2018 12:17:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem with beautiful painting which very much reflected. Enjoyed reading it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/4/2018 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Ravi, you are a good friend...
Date: 4/3/2018 3:55:00 PM
Nice painting, I like the colours.. You do ghazals very well... I've stopped looking in the mirror, but I was never a vain one.. Lol
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 6:05:00 PM
My dear friend, you must be young, handsome with a lots hair. I'm bald and old...Thank you for kind words..
Date: 4/3/2018 1:49:00 PM
Your skills are not limited to poetry, Pashang. You excel in both avenues of talent.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Lin...I have to keep myself busy... For Jan, to me you are immortalized already..Thanks to both of you..
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2018 2:02:00 PM
I've had to drop by to show my hubby the awesome pic Lin, I'm immortalised in paint forever and so honoured to be featured in the picture as a dragonfly:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 6:19:00 AM
Beautiful painting..a reflective poem..deep in thoughts..well done, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 5:57:00 PM
You are so kind Vijay... thank you for stopping by....
Date: 4/3/2018 3:49:00 AM
Oh Pashang I'm sure many can relate to looking in the mirror and remembering how we used to look but we have to face the sad fact we are getting older and our reflection will change over time. The painting is absolutely stunning one of my faves of yours and I love the reflection of the dragonfly being a butterfly - your creativity is so enviable as I am not artistic in the slightest! !:-):-) Hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 5:56:00 PM
Dear Jan, you know I love your work and as a dragonfly you only seek love... I have an enlarged picture of myself when I was 18 years old in my room... When I compare now and then I see oxidation and reduction. I wish I did not know chemistry.....
Date: 4/3/2018 3:04:00 AM
- When we are young ... we love it ... when we grow older ... we hate it :) - A great painting and poems, Pasang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise... If I knew about aging, I would have never aged....
Date: 4/2/2018 8:47:00 PM
Yes my friend, we are getting old. The poem is a little sad but so is aging. Beautiful painting. Did you paint it? I apologize for not being around much lately. Since my mom passed, i really haven't felt much like writing or socializing. I am getting better by the day. Take care my friend:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 2:23:00 AM
Sorry about your mom DT, I lost mine less than a year and half ago, I couldn't see her and say goodbye, and that was devastating. I wrote a Ghazal called Panacea for her... I miss her a lot.... I know where you're coming from. Please accept my condolences....

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