Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Inside Our Quiet World

My parcel of quietude becomes yours
while we listen to the same monastic silence,
gazing at clouds alone and  together
until we rest lovingly inside our gentle, holy world.


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Gregory R. Barden's Liberum Divisa Contest
Posted 05/04/2019
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Excerpt from ' Anything Goes On A Sunday '
Originally written 12/29/2016

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Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2019 at 3:07 PM back with my congrats for your awesome win, Nette.

John Hamilton May 28, 2019 at 8:54 AM Loved this Nette, "monastic silence" great word combo, congrats on a great win!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 24, 2019 at 2:20 PM Serene! Lovely piece Nette <3 Congratulations for your win! xomo

Eve Roper May 24, 2019 at 2:08 PM Beautiful verse, my favorite words monastic silence, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Suzanne Delaney May 18, 2019 at 8:57 PM I relate to this in every way. We love our quiet life too. I love how you embrace it so completely. Onto my Favs list. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2019 at 2:46 PM Beautiful, nette. Wow, this contest is producing many amazing entries!

Mystic Rose Rose May 6, 2019 at 12:52 PM Your talking my language when your talking quietude and silence. Winning wishes dear Nette, hope you have a good Monday . xo

Lawrence Sharp May 5, 2019 at 10:20 AM Good stuff, Nette, beautifully written.

Judy Ball May 5, 2019 at 7:59 AM I can see two people in two different places sitting in sweet repose and making a spiritual connection through the miles. Beautifully done. I really like it. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit May 5, 2019 at 7:54 AM Awesome weaving of words..nicely done, Nette..all the best.

Tom Cunningham May 5, 2019 at 7:54 AM A gem on its own nette, Good luck. Tom

Silent One May 5, 2019 at 6:32 AM Very romantic, i love a quiet world.. as you know...

Susan Ashley May 4, 2019 at 7:34 PM You have the gift of exquisite expression, Nette. Precious poetry. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues May 4, 2019 at 7:06 PM It’s a must to read your sweet poem a few times. Brevity packs a punch with its exact words.

Eve Roper May 4, 2019 at 7:02 PM Beautiful, Nette, so very romantic and serene. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Heidi Sands May 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM Your poem is so peaceful Nette! Nice to read this evening :)