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Inside My Soul

I look inside my soul and there you are

As beautiful as you've ever been

Passionately whispering love words to me

Gently running your fingers through my hair

Caressing my thoughts, tenderly whispering

I love you my dearest one

Love of my life, where have you been

Don't you know I've been waiting for you

No matter... you are now...  here beside me

Your scent of jasmine fills the air

Taking me to some far off romantic place

Just the two of us... alone

Not a soul to break the spell

This magic spell of romance

Of utter devotion, of caring

Days are brighter, night skies are starrier

We gaze at the heavens as one

Dreaming dreams, lost in each others embrace

Never, ever wanting the moment to end

Knowing our love will last and last

Through all the trials and tribulations

That this life can throw at us

Because for the very first time

I now know what real love is

I will never forget you my sweet lady

You have my heart in the palm of your hand

Please treat it gently

I am yours for eternity...


© Jack Ellison 2014

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Sarai Virden Date: 1/19/2014 4:31:00 AM Love your sweet love poems Jack, so touching and heartfelt. A true treasure. Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/19/2014 9:01:00 AM Awww! Dear sweet Sarai... thank you! You are my inspiration! Love, Jack XOXOX

Carol Eastman Date: 1/17/2014 5:33:00 PM A B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L love poem! You've lite up Cathie's life for sure... The penguins said Dragon lights up their life... with his fire... I guess if I came from the south pole I'd love anyone who can breathe fire, too... Aren't they sweet... But obviously young... LOL... Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/18/2014 6:13:00 PM W-O-W-S-E-R-S! What a beautiful response to my words of love! See... even at the ripe old age of 78, I can still titillate... ??? is that a naughty words! XOXOX

Russell Sivey Date: 1/16/2014 6:37:00 PM Wow Jack! What a romantic you truly are! You have a heart of gold my friend! We are similar in that respect, I am quite the romantic when I want to be, I try! You are doing very well with these narratives, I think you should look into writing more of these! Great Work!! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/16/2014 7:00:00 PM Rebecca is responsible for starting me on these... thought I'd give it a whirl! Thank you my very good friend! Cheers!!!!

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/16/2014 4:59:00 PM wow, a different style of poem from you and it's wonderful! (not that your usual ones aren't!). i enjoyed this very much... Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/16/2014 5:10:00 PM Rebecca suggested I try some narratives! Kinda enjoy it... no structure... much more freedom! Will try some more! Thanks and big huggeroonies, my dear Ilene! XOXOX

Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/16/2014 4:02:00 PM Sigh, love the way you express love..so beautiful. BG Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/16/2014 4:06:00 PM Ooops sorry Barbara... a glitch! Your comments on my love narrative are sooo sweet ! Thanks a bunch dear one!!! XOXOX Barbara Gorelick Date: 1/16/2014 4:06:00 PM oops...lol Jack Ellison Date: 1/16/2014 4:03:00 PM Awww! Thank you my dear Rebecca! You comments are so sweet as usual! Without your inspiration, I wouldn't be trying these... thank you dear Rebecca!!! XOXOX

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/16/2014 3:45:00 PM A very very beautiful poem of love and longing, Kenny. It is magnificent in every way. It absolutely captivates and enthralls. She will love this......... Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 1/16/2014 4:08:00 PM Eileen, my sweet! Your words make my heart soar! They are so much appreciated! Love and warm snuggly hugs, Kenny XOXOX