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Inside My Soul

I look inside my soul and there you are As beautiful as you've ever been Passionately whispering love words to me Gently running your fingers through my hair Caressing my thoughts, tenderly whispering I love you my dearest one Love of my life, where have you been Don't you know I've been waiting for you No matter... you are now... here beside me Your scent of jasmine fills the air Taking me to some far off romantic place Just the two of us... alone Not a soul to break the spell This magic spell of romance Of utter devotion, of caring Days are brighter, night skies are starrier We gaze at the heavens as one Dreaming dreams, lost in each others embrace Never, ever wanting the moment to end Knowing our love will last and last Through all the trials and tribulations That this life can throw at us Because for the very first time I now know what real love is I will never forget you my sweet lady You have my heart in the palm of your hand Please treat it gently I am yours for eternity... © Jack Ellison 2014

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Sarai Virden

Date: 1/19/2014 4:31:00 AM

Love your sweet love poems Jack, so touching and heartfelt. A true treasure.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/19/2014 9:01:00 AM

Awww! Dear sweet Sarai... thank you! You are my inspiration! Love, Jack XOXOX

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/17/2014 5:33:00 PM

A B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L love poem! You've lite up Cathie's life for sure... The penguins said Dragon lights up their life... with his fire... I guess if I came from the south pole I'd love anyone who can breathe fire, too... Aren't they sweet... But obviously young... LOL...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/18/2014 6:13:00 PM

W-O-W-S-E-R-S! What a beautiful response to my words of love! See... even at the ripe old age of 78, I can still titillate... ??? is that a naughty words! XOXOX

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/16/2014 6:37:00 PM

Wow Jack! What a romantic you truly are! You have a heart of gold my friend! We are similar in that respect, I am quite the romantic when I want to be, I try! You are doing very well with these narratives, I think you should look into writing more of these! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/16/2014 7:00:00 PM

Rebecca is responsible for starting me on these... thought I'd give it a whirl! Thank you my very good friend! Cheers!!!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/16/2014 4:59:00 PM

wow, a different style of poem from you and it's wonderful! (not that your usual ones aren't!). i enjoyed this very much...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/16/2014 5:10:00 PM

Rebecca suggested I try some narratives! Kinda enjoy it... no structure... much more freedom! Will try some more! Thanks and big huggeroonies, my dear Ilene! XOXOX

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/16/2014 4:02:00 PM

Sigh, love the way you express love..so beautiful. BG

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/16/2014 4:06:00 PM

Ooops sorry Barbara... a glitch! Your comments on my love narrative are sooo sweet ! Thanks a bunch dear one!!! XOXOX

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/16/2014 4:06:00 PM

oops...lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/16/2014 4:03:00 PM

Awww! Thank you my dear Rebecca! You comments are so sweet as usual! Without your inspiration, I wouldn't be trying these... thank you dear Rebecca!!! XOXOX

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/16/2014 3:45:00 PM

A very very beautiful poem of love and longing, Kenny. It is magnificent in every way. It absolutely captivates and enthralls. She will love this.........

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/16/2014 4:08:00 PM

Eileen, my sweet! Your words make my heart soar! They are so much appreciated! Love and warm snuggly hugs, Kenny XOXOX