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Inside My Soul

I look inside my soul and there you are As beautiful as ever Passionately whispering love words Gently running your fingers through my hair Caressing my thoughts, tenderly whispering I love you my dearest one Love of my life, where have you been Don't you know I've been waiting for you No matter... you are beside me now Your scent of jasmine is driving me wild Taking me to a far off romantic place Just the two of us... alone Not a soul to break the spell This magic spell of romance Of utter devotion, of caring Days are brighter, night skies have more stars Gazing at the heavens as one Dreaming dreams, lost in each others embrace Never, ever wanting the moment to end Knowing our love will last for eternity Through all the trials and tribulations That this life can throw at us Because for the very first time I now know what real love is I will never forget you my love You have my heart in the palm of your hand Please treat it gently I am yours for eternity...

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Date: 4/12/2024 2:45:00 PM
Very romantic lines Jack, you're quite the romantic at heart. Greetings from Crete, hope alls well. Tom
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:28:00 PM
wowza write....'inside a crystal ball soul... the heavens life can throw at us".....mind- life be 4d mirror time travel........stan
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Sand Blown
Date: 4/11/2024 6:07:00 PM
...our reality is 4d....memory/awareness is time imaging within our 'being' 4d....and, present-time holographics are based on the 'being' of a vaster foundation than a 4d reality .....it's logic leads into an infinite....the container we hold..... stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2024 5:35:00 PM
A 4d mirror? Is there such a thing? lol Have a good one my friend!
Date: 4/11/2024 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 4/11/2024 10:32:00 AM
Lol ... Don't worry about it, you'll be surprised how often my name is misspelt. And if I was good at spelling myself, I'd have room to criticise... If it wasn't for auto correct on the keyboard, goodness only knows how my work would be read ... Lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2024 9:43:00 AM
Oops... Natasha!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2024 8:54:00 AM
Very much appreciated Natasa! XXX
Date: 4/11/2024 7:25:00 AM
Hello Jack, Your poem beautifully conveys a deep soulful connection and love that transcends time and space, capturing the essence of finding one's true companion. Beautiful! Don
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2024 9:09:00 AM
That special feeling eh Don! You have continued with my theme admirably! Cheers Happy Jack
Date: 4/11/2024 5:53:00 AM
such a soulful and beautifully constructed love poem, dear Jack. I became teary-eyed as I read it thinking about an enduring and endearing relationship. Such touching words. Thanks for sharing today. hugs, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2024 6:07:00 AM
You convey such beautiful words in the way you describe life! We are so blessed... love,Happy Jack xxx

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