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Inside My Head

Inside my Head
inside my head deep within my heart, like an old portrait tucked away in a treasured locket, safely kept suspended in time… memories of my first love with his loving smile, which like sunshine could melt my heart; his warm, gentle touch his tender embrace the taste of his passionate kisses, the way he walked with that slight swagger so recognizable from afar; his husky voice that whispered shared secrets between us two, as he filled every day with romance; like soothing summer rain, he’s been dwelling inside my head
but wait a second - that sucker’s been long gone, married a new love and flippantly moved on; so it’s time for me to finally let go of all these pointless memories… inside my head
09-13-2015 Contest: Trashed #2 Sponsor: Broken Wings Placement: 5th

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Date: 7/9/2018 1:17:00 PM
I love you Pandita you are a darling with lines. excellent to achieve this kind of tallent
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/9/2018 3:00:00 PM
Awwww! What a very sweet compliment, Al! You made my day! Thank you so very much! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 12/17/2015 4:09:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:54:00 PM
What a very nice compliment, Funom! Thank you so much for stopping by and for the high score! Hope you are having a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 10/14/2015 10:05:00 PM
Pandita, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 10/15/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much, my dear SKAT! It's always great to hear from you! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/12/2015 3:12:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Pandita! Wonder how such a beautiful poem got trashed in any contest?
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 10/12/2015 7:34:00 AM
Dear Dr. Sharma, thank you so much for your welcomed compliments! I am glad that you enjoyed this piece and thank you for your support! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 10/11/2015 10:18:00 PM
Great that this fine poem got placed this time! Congrats my friend.
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Date: 10/12/2015 7:37:00 AM
My dear friend, thank you for returning with your wonderful compliments which I so appreciate! Enjoy the day! Pandita
Date: 10/11/2015 7:20:00 PM
Pandita, I agree with Silent One. This well written write should have placed the first time. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 10/12/2015 7:31:00 AM
Hi Alexis, thank you so much for your always complimentary words for my work! I hope you have a great week ahead, my friend! Pandita
Date: 10/11/2015 3:00:00 PM
Pandita, I enjoyed your poem when you entered it for the previous contest, and I'm happy to see it get recognition on the winner's list now! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 10/11/2015 5:25:00 PM
Sandra, my thanks to you again for all your support and lovely comments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/11/2015 2:51:00 PM
great twist at the end Pandita congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2015 5:26:00 PM
Hi Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 10/11/2015 2:42:00 PM
Pleased to be back with congratulations, Pandita! ...a merited win! // paul
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Date: 10/11/2015 5:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend! It's always great to hear from you! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 9/20/2015 3:52:00 PM
Can't blame you for turning your thoughts back to your first love, Pandita!! Pity he moved on ... or is it?:) OK, it's fictional, but you make it sound quite real! ~ All the best. // paul
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/21/2015 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your always complimentary words for my work, Paul! I hope you have a great day, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/18/2015 7:45:00 PM
Made me smile, my friend. Reminds me of a song that's sweet and melancholic in the beginning but suddenly bursts into rock madness...:-) All the best! hugs!
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:10:00 PM
What a very nice compliment! Thank you so much, Kim! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 9/18/2015 3:14:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Love the ending. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/18/2015 8:51:00 AM
Dear Ravi, I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you for the compliments and have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 9/15/2015 2:28:00 PM
Hi Pandita, I like your take on this theme! Well-done, and I especially like the last verse! All the best in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/16/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for your always complimentary words for my work, Sandra! I hope you have a great day, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/15/2015 8:38:00 AM
The ending surprised me and made me laugh, it's good to put that "sucker" out of your head.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/16/2015 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, my dear Richard, for your welcomed compliments! I am glad that you enjoyed this piece and thank you for your support! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 9/14/2015 10:22:00 PM
LOVE THE ENDING, REALITY STRIKES AND THE PROUD LADY STRIKES BACK. Mom always said, if you spill your milk just get another glass. Super 7 on this one...
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/16/2015 4:20:00 PM
Hi Robert, I'm on the same page as your your mom - don't waste time over spilled milk when there's more to be had:-)! Thank you so much for your kind compliments and high score! Best wishes! Pandita
Date: 9/14/2015 5:28:00 PM
wow, I loved the twist. you got angry and came to the only conclusion, Wash that man right out of your hair (in this case, out of your head!!)
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:15:00 PM
Hehehehe - sometimes it takes a minute for us to realize that some memories belong in the trash can - to be discarded forever:-)! I'm glad you enjoyed this one, Andie! Have a great day! Pandita
Date: 9/14/2015 8:41:00 AM
Wow Pandita you had me thinking it was a great relationship. Until the last lines. Great work here. Love the ending. A 7 for sure. Nicely done. Yes Dear its time to move on. His terrible loss was you.
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your always complimentary words for my work, Michael! I also appreciate the high score! You have made my day and I hope you have a great one too, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/13/2015 10:41:00 PM
That's right Pandita time to form some new memories in your head. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/14/2015 7:02:00 AM
Hi Gwen, thank you so very much for being the first to comment on this piece! You and I are on the same page, my dear, it's time to clean house and get rid of all the ghosts that are occupying space there:-)! I appreciate your wonderful comments, compliments and support! Warmest regards. Pandita