Notes About The Poem

Inside Garden of Anemones

Anemones are the symbols of anticipation and fragility. 

Daffy bent down suddenly, and picked a small startled white flower. “Anemone,” he said, handing it over; he made her repeat the word until she had it right. “Find me a silk to match that.”

—Emma Donoghue


INSIDE GARDEN OF ANEMONES


   inside garden —

its wiggle of ultra fine threads,

pastel blue and pink wormy stems.

   full-frontal petals, contiguous.

blossom’s cerulean, buttercup and bittersweet.

  the velvet sky, black.

            its vibrant neon flowers

      bright, float in the canvas-night,

though a few, unopened, droop

      like indian pipes.

spread of unscented paint —

   dry, flat, spurning soil,
a floral garden
   surrounded by
a golden frame.

          its wall is white.

3/12/2021
Flower or Flowers in Imagism Form
Sponsor: Constance La France

anemone — pronounced “uh nem uh nee”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:24 AM
This should go straight to the winner’s circle Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Caren <3
Kauffman Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Lovely, Kim. A wonderful surprise ending! All the best for the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 1:37 AM
Great poetry, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Pettit Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Pretty words to go with pretty pictures.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Just gorgious, Kim. One of your best!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Ball Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Nicely done Kim. I love anemones. Well done. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:44 PM
God bless you too, Judy! Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I have never seen this particular flower but I am sure it is lovely. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:23 AM
This might be one of the prettiest flower poems I have ever read. Blessings and dare I say Congrats in advance? Well done! Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Thank you so much, Rick!
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Beautiful anemones grace your poem, Kim. Excellent imagery you created.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Imagism at its best. I have no doubt you will place well.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Thank you! It took many days.
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 8:18 AM
- Anemones are beautiful flowers ... so is your poem, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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