Inside A Cloud

What's it feel like to live inside a cloud? A mist so thick it isolates, confounds, and consumes you. There is no up, no down, nor sideways. You're enshrouded in fog. Living amidst rolling banks, without sound or sight, poses the question. Why would anyone choose to live inside a cloud? Clouds are surreal; an all-encompassing mist that promotes a reality tethered to a dream. Dreams may entice you to live in that fantasy, and yet, love cannot find you in the clouds. Evoke the winds of fate to blow away the fog, and step outside of your delusions. Sometimes, you need to get your head out of the clouds, open your eyes, and have a good look around! Leave your phone at home, enjoy the sun, and have fun mingling with live people with real feelings, and beating hearts; just like you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Great message, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Emile, you have penned a very emotional poem that many can relate to, we all go around sometimes in a cloud, not seeing- well done ~
Pinet Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Thanks Constance, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
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