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Insecurities

(poem version/unedited - first look at my future writing projects) Doors will open soon Love is a hidden treasure Doors will close...oh joy! Ascend, self-esteem! Lift me higher than the clouds The clouds overhead Hey? Give me your all! Hit me with your best shot, man - - - We need to stand tall! The clouds overhead Shed droplets of blue lament . . . Sunshine's near, pour clouds! ~!@#$%^&*()_++_)(*&^%$#@!~ Sunshine's near, pour clouds! Relieve gloom of Yesterday's tomorrow Cheer up, whiten up! Relieve the gloom of our sorrow... Cheer up, lighten up! There's more hope to borrow Let the sun rays warm your soul . . . Disconsolate clouds My self-esteem's low Who ruined my self-esteem? Oh... No! It can't be you! Is it you? Disconsolate clouds Why do you weep bitterly? Do you need a FRIEND?.... Why do I feel blue? Arise like the sunrise, please? Have high hopes with me!! Do you need a friend for real? Clothe you w-with hope, not sheer fear Cheer up, brighten up! Cheer up, listen up! Elevate me with sheer cheer! Grab the Rope of Hope======== Hey? I welcome you No! Don't bid me a farewell ! You're good company!! Good riddance, sorrow Attitude of Gratitude . . . Tomorrow draws near You erased my fearz I'm feelin' like I belong Smile with sunlit glee with me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/30/2014 11:29:00 AM
Attitude of Gratitude.....truly just brilliant piece!:)<3-Love Ettie
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Date: 8/5/2014 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Ettie! You're sweet. I will publish a total of 700 poems today I promise.
Date: 7/26/2014 10:33:00 PM
Interesting write....My favorite line? The clouds overhead shed droplets of blue lament...Lovely! Here I am...I've come to visit.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 7/27/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you! This poem needs to be edited shtill. :) I love that line too...one of my favourite lines I think. Well, I enjoy your visitz. I wish your day's as sunny as mine! =) -DWB

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