Insecurities

(poem version/unedited - first look at my future writing projects)

Doors will open soon
Love is a hidden treasure
Doors will close...oh joy!
Ascend, self-esteem!
Lift me higher than the clouds
The clouds overhead
Hey? Give me your all!
Hit me with your best shot, man - - - 
We need to stand tall!
The clouds overhead
Shed droplets of blue lament . . . 
Sunshine's near, pour clouds! 

~!@#$%^&*()_++_)(*&^%$#@!~

Sunshine's near, pour clouds!
Relieve gloom of Yesterday's tomorrow 
Cheer up, whiten up! Relieve the gloom of our sorrow...
Cheer up, lighten up! There's more hope to borrow
Let the sun rays warm your soul . . . 
Disconsolate clouds
My self-esteem's low
Who ruined my self-esteem? Oh...
No! It can't be you!
Is it you?
Disconsolate clouds 
Why do you weep bitterly?
Do you need a FRIEND?....
Why do I feel blue?
Arise like the sunrise, please?
Have high hopes with me!!
Do you need a friend for real?
Clothe you w-with hope, not sheer fear
Cheer up, brighten up!
Cheer up, listen up!
Elevate me with sheer cheer!
Grab the Rope of Hope========
Hey? I welcome you 
No! Don't bid me a farewell !
You're good company!!
Good riddance, sorrow
Attitude of Gratitude . . . 
Tomorrow draws near
You erased my fearz
I'm feelin' like I belong
Smile with sunlit glee with me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/30/2014 11:29:00 AM
Attitude of Gratitude.....truly just brilliant piece!:)<3-Love Ettie
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 8/5/2014 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Ettie! You're sweet. I will publish a total of 700 poems today I promise.
Date: 7/26/2014 10:33:00 PM
Interesting write....My favorite line? The clouds overhead shed droplets of blue lament...Lovely! Here I am...I've come to visit.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 7/27/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you! This poem needs to be edited shtill. :) I love that line too...one of my favourite lines I think. Well, I enjoy your visitz. I wish your day's as sunny as mine! =) -DWB
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