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Insecured Smoke

Your sun-tanned skin, On which I am high, Those curls and smoke-stained lips— Have drugged me long; Wet afternoons and your hazel eyes— Immersed me into the foggy fountain! Our body fluids are well acquainted, Yet our minds are lost in an intoxicating fume! Submitted to: Some Kind of Sensual Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Written and submitted on: 04/06/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/16/2020 5:31:00 AM

Sensual and exciting.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:24:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/11/2020 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much. Love Jhinuk

John Watt

Date: 6/4/2020 11:07:00 AM

Intoxicating and sensual, this should do well in the contest, Jhinuk. ~ John

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/4/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thank you so much. Love Jhinuk.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/4/2020 10:26:00 AM

A nice piece Jhinuk, good imagery and fine expression but maybe better to extend the piece further. Keep spilling the ink, Trust you are well, Blessings, Gordon

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/4/2020 12:33:00 PM

Oh thank you so much. Yes more could be written however there was word limit so had to end. But I could develop a fuller version, thanks for your precious advice.