Insecure

There seems so little point in killing one
Whose only crime is to heal
But when he calls you a hypocrite - a whitewashed tomb
And deep inside you feel
That wrong or right, his power is more than yours
You've got to serve him or kill him
Choose him or lose him.

Fumbled and mismanaged, no one wants
To actually do the deed
Fob him off on Pilate, or Herod; they try not to get involved
But finally in pressure it's agreed
To give him up, although for what we don't quite know
Quickly bundle him on a cross
And see if he'll die.

That'll stop it all then, the whole thing will go
A nine - days wonder, blow itself out
Dead men tell no tales and do not pose a threat
Or introduce a doubt
In an empty form that one time made you feel secure
Preserve your dignity
Lose your integrity

It didn't stop it all though did it?
The ripples of his life still spread
People still believe and live as if his paradoxes work
And he isn't really dead
And he still stirs up something in this day
Which try as you will
You can't kill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/23/2014 8:50:00 AM
i dont know if this write is about your self or someone else but a nice pace of writing lots of emotion kind of leaves one distilled in the moment when you say on verse two preserve your dignity lose your integrity keep self respect but lose your honesty maybe missread like this one a lot too though look forward to reading more of your work always davidscott
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Date: 8/3/2014 1:38:00 PM
Barney welcome to the soup, excellent poem great flow and full of faith....David
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