Insatiable How I Remember

i remember the blue of your eyes
drilling down to my core
wanting them to devour me

remembering how they called me
i remember well how they still haunt me



AP: 2nd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fairchild Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 12:02 AM
I can remember Laurie's beautiful green eyes reading this.
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Hugs xx
Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Love this... I have felt so much in remembrance... it is like a soft scream inside the mind, haunting the heart and whispering longing through the soul. Your creation is brilliant. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Gina ~
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Your lines are filled with the pathos of yearning memories Line. This is haunting! Blessings to you.
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 9:00 PM
thank you so much, Sam ~
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