Get Your Premium Membership

Insane

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Vijay Pandit.


Insane Defiantly I admonish you to just leave me alone, Stop following me incessantly like a rowdy foe. How forcefully must I tell, you've lost your soul, Your sinister ways to love me I do not condone. You shadow my presence everywhere I go Blatantly invading every peaceful place I know. Lurking around my private life in public places, Posting online photos and ugly lewd messages. If you're ever spotted at my kids' school again You can be sure I will file a police complaint, Quite often have I warned you to back away Yet you keep treating me like I'm your prey. One day you called my wife on a falls pretense, Now you treat her like she's your best friend Spreading lies intently to prejudice her mind Encroaching on our daily lives in ways unkind. You joined our church, though you live far away, I hear you'll volunteer at school every Monday. Now I am distressed by your manipulative ways, Prompting me to take action to deter your sway. At the height of insanity you finally lost control, Quite appropriately you must soon pay a toll As you sit in jail awaiting sentence for your crime For you tried to hire a hit-man to kill my wife. First Place November 10, 2017 Stalker Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/31/2022 9:10:00 PM
Sometimes, people go insane with 'mad' love... ! It is not love, but sheer selfishness, never caring for the misery it is going to bring on the targeted one and his family. For a family man , such behavior is unbearable. Now she is in jail... Let her suffer the brunt of her action ! A wonderful poem true to life...Vijay!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2017 1:17:00 AM
Congrats, Vijay, on a fine write. Regards, Viv
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Viv--thanks for the visit!
Date: 11/18/2017 11:41:00 PM
Man, this iron-fist poem delivers a punch to the gut ... TKO poetry, Vijay! The final lines speaks for itself. Great dark Gothic-themed poem. Love and smiles always.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 11/18/2017 5:32:00 PM
Such a well-written poem, Vijay. Congratulations on your fine podium placement. Sandra
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 11/18/2017 4:49:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Vijay ... blessings! :-)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Greg!
Date: 11/17/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/17/2017 1:53:00 PM
Excellent story telling using great rhyme and flow.. You did a great poem for this contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:48:00 PM
Most impressive and scary too Vijay - great imagination as always with your poems. I must confess I wouldn't like to be in that position...Maria
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 11/11/2017 1:16:00 PM
Insanity painted in its most dark colors as stalking accompanies it! Great writing my dear friend, Vijay!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios!
Date: 11/11/2017 7:40:00 AM
A very chilling case of stalking...Well written Vijay
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/11/2017 3:41:00 AM
Very very good stuff Vijay. Were you watching a crime show on tv before you wrote this? Very in depth. I'm just thankful none ever found me that irresistable.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 11/10/2017 8:09:00 PM
this is much like the plot of a true crime from INvestigative Discovery ID channel. Very well told in rhyme, Vijay.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 11/10/2017 8:08:00 PM
An intense write Vijay. You had me captivated from the start to the surprising end. Well written, chilling, excellent and enjoyed!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 11/10/2017 1:37:00 PM
ohh my, sounds like a plot in a movie; i was there from the start and got startled with your ending...very reveting, vijay!..huggs
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you nette!
Date: 11/10/2017 8:27:00 AM
Perfect--and chilling--description of a stalker, Vijay! Janice
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 11/10/2017 8:02:00 AM
Now that is one insane person! I hope he gets a life sentence in a psychiatric hospital because he must be crazy! I would hate to run up upon a person such as that! Your write sure is frightening, as a stalker is too! I loved reading your illustrious poem this morning, you have impressed me by your skillful nature on this piece, such an awesome job at writing this incredible write Vijay! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Russell!
Date: 11/10/2017 7:27:00 AM
Great write Vijay, good luck in the contest :)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Gary!
Date: 11/10/2017 7:08:00 AM
Well done Vijay! That sure displays the insanity involved with stalking . Good luck in the contest! :)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/10/2017 6:55:00 AM
Life is tough enough without dealing with the insane!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Kim!

Book: Shattered Sighs