Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

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Insane

Insane

Defiantly I admonish you to just leave me alone,
Stop following me incessantly like a rowdy foe.
How forcefully must I tell, you've lost your soul,
Your sinister ways to love me I do not condone.

You shadow my presence everywhere I go
Blatantly invading every peaceful place I know.
Lurking around my private life in public places,
Posting online photos and ugly lewd messages.

If you're ever spotted at my kids' school again
You can be sure I will file a police complaint,
Quite often have I warned you to back away
Yet you keep treating me like I'm your prey.

One day you called my wife on a falls pretense,
Now you treat her like she's your best friend
Spreading lies intently to prejudice her mind
Encroaching on our daily lives in ways unkind.

You joined our church, though you live far away,
I hear you'll volunteer at school every Monday.
Now I am distressed by your manipulative ways,
Prompting me to take action to deter your sway.

At the height of insanity you finally lost control,
Quite appropriately you must soon pay a toll
As you sit in jail awaiting sentence for your crime
For you tried to hire a hit-man to kill my wife.

First Place
November 10, 2017
Stalker
Sponsor: Silent One

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Valsa George May 31, 2022 at 9:10 PM Sometimes, people go insane with 'mad' love... ! It is not love, but sheer selfishness, never caring for the misery it is going to bring on the targeted one and his family. For a family man , such behavior is unbearable. Now she is in jail... Let her suffer the brunt of her action ! A wonderful poem true to life...Vijay!

Viv Wigley November 19, 2017 at 1:17 AM Congrats, Vijay, on a fine write. Regards, Viv Vijay Pandit November 19, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thank you Viv--thanks for the visit!

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 18, 2017 at 11:41 PM Man, this iron-fist poem delivers a punch to the gut ... TKO poetry, Vijay! The final lines speaks for itself. Great dark Gothic-themed poem. Love and smiles always. Vijay Pandit November 19, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thank you Freddie!

Sandra Haight November 18, 2017 at 5:32 PM Such a well-written poem, Vijay. Congratulations on your fine podium placement. Sandra Vijay Pandit November 19, 2017 at 6:55 AM Thanks Sandra!

Gregory Richard Barden November 18, 2017 at 4:49 AM Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Vijay ... blessings! :-) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2017 at 6:43 AM Thank you Greg!

Heidi Sands November 17, 2017 at 4:32 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit November 18, 2017 at 6:43 AM Thank you Heidi!

Silent One November 17, 2017 at 1:53 PM Excellent story telling using great rhyme and flow.. You did a great poem for this contest.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest Vijay Pandit November 18, 2017 at 6:43 AM Thank you Silent One!

Maria Williams November 16, 2017 at 9:48 PM Most impressive and scary too Vijay - great imagination as always with your poems. I must confess I wouldn't like to be in that position...Maria Vijay Pandit November 17, 2017 at 7:14 AM Thank you Maria!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 11, 2017 at 1:16 PM Insanity painted in its most dark colors as stalking accompanies it! Great writing my dear friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit November 11, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thank you Demetrios!

Joseph May November 11, 2017 at 7:40 AM A very chilling case of stalking...Well written Vijay Vijay Pandit November 11, 2017 at 8:20 AM Thank you Joseph!

James Swartz November 11, 2017 at 3:41 AM Very very good stuff Vijay. Were you watching a crime show on tv before you wrote this? Very in depth. I'm just thankful none ever found me that irresistable. Vijay Pandit November 11, 2017 at 5:40 AM Thank you James!

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2017 at 8:09 PM this is much like the plot of a true crime from INvestigative Discovery ID channel. Very well told in rhyme, Vijay. Vijay Pandit November 11, 2017 at 5:40 AM Thank you Andrea!

Susan Ashley November 10, 2017 at 8:08 PM An intense write Vijay. You had me captivated from the start to the surprising end. Well written, chilling, excellent and enjoyed! Vijay Pandit November 11, 2017 at 5:39 AM Thank you Susan!

Nette Onclaud November 10, 2017 at 1:37 PM ohh my, sounds like a plot in a movie; i was there from the start and got startled with your ending...very reveting, vijay!..huggs Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thank you nette!

Janice Canerdy November 10, 2017 at 8:27 AM Perfect--and chilling--description of a stalker, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 11:14 AM Thank you Janice!

Russell Sivey November 10, 2017 at 8:02 AM Now that is one insane person! I hope he gets a life sentence in a psychiatric hospital because he must be crazy! I would hate to run up upon a person such as that! Your write sure is frightening, as a stalker is too! I loved reading your illustrious poem this morning, you have impressed me by your skillful nature on this piece, such an awesome job at writing this incredible write Vijay! Great Work!! Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 11:14 AM Thank you Russell!

Gary Smith November 10, 2017 at 7:27 AM Great write Vijay, good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thank you Gary!

Heidi Sands November 10, 2017 at 7:08 AM Well done Vijay! That sure displays the insanity involved with stalking . Good luck in the contest! :) Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thank you Heidi!

Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2017 at 6:55 AM Life is tough enough without dealing with the insane! Vijay Pandit November 10, 2017 at 11:12 AM Thank you Kim!