Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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20.03.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Innocent Victim -

  Hungry morning dew
  perpetual heavy haze
  icy embrace
  blood red rubies
  another victim
  in a dark alley
  beaten with chains
  Bruises
  Pulverizes the earthlings existence
  without hesitation
  A beast in human form
  crouched as a wildcat

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Duke Beaufort March 25, 2025 at 1:29 PM Anne-Lise, I'm reading this and thinking how similar our thought process may be. We do have a problem with beasts and it strikes us as cruel. You are very perceptive and talented. Smiles!!

Margaret Foster March 20, 2025 at 9:07 PM As others have said, a dark and disturbing Poem. Your imagery is quite graphic. Well, written. Anne-lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:31 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Margaret :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock March 20, 2025 at 7:31 PM So sad when there is so much violence these days. Well said my friend. Have a great weekend. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:30 AM - No one can feel 100% safe in this world... blind violence... an innocent victim... - Have a lovely weekend too, dear Phyllis :) - hugs

Oliver Mckeithan March 20, 2025 at 7:10 PM Powerful write with excellent imagery. Dark and sad Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:28 AM - Dark and cruel... when "predators" go wild, Oliver - hugs

Jan Allison March 20, 2025 at 5:57 PM such dark chilling imagery Anne-Lise ' a beast in human form' strikes a chord to quite a few innocent people I'm afraid:-( hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:26 AM - When the world is shown naked... the horrible will emerge... yes, truly terrifying Jan - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino March 20, 2025 at 5:27 PM Yep, seen more violence than I would have liked to. Never makes sense. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:24 AM - We see or hear about it every day, Joe - hugs

Tom Cunningham March 20, 2025 at 11:49 AM Some humans don't deserve to be called that, those inflicting violence on others. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:23 AM - Worse than a predator, Tom - hugs

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2025 at 10:49 AM I enjoyed reading your powerful write. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun/blessed day as you write away........... Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2025 at 4:22 AM - Thank you very much for your comment and good luck, Paula :) - hugs

John Read March 20, 2025 at 9:51 AM Good luck in the contest Anne I've given up trying lol. xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2025 at 10:32 AM - I should have given up a long time ago in Brian Strand's contest ... N/A, N/A and N/A ... :))) - Thank you for your comment, John :) - hugs

Jay Narain March 20, 2025 at 9:42 AM Nice poem Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2025 at 10:32 AM - Jay, thank you for your comment :) - hugs