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Innocent Love

Amid the mighty Arabian she was born and bred A girl as delicate as the sweet smelling rose For food she took the camel’s milk and choicest white bread And a beauty mark she had at the base of her nose A soft veil of satin covered her head And amongst all the knights that at her command rose She choose a mysterious stranger in her desert town Long of limbs and tanned chocolate brown Her love she conveyed with kohl black eyes Her deep flowing desire by the tinniest of touch so warm She did not pay heed to any well meaning advice For in her life was raging a new storm Their hearts were joined with divinely ties It had no human body or a concrete form She had never touched or kissed those lips Nor felt his heart with those soft white fingertips With him she left the desert on the night of no moon True in her faith, love soaring ever so high His merest touch and warm breath made her swoon When he placed her amid his powerful thigh And on they rode over every treacherous dune When tired on the beautiful oasis sand did lie A love that began through the language of the eyes Became the legend for which many a lover dies By- Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2011 12:18:00 AM
wow, love this mystery-laden piece, tahera! all my best CHEERS to you for the high win! :) huggs!
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:14:00 PM
such a charmer, a true fairy tale! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:37:00 AM
Hey there Tahera, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:49:00 AM
Such a romantic poem....it sings almost like a ballad...I can almost hear the strings in the background of sad love! Well done!! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2011 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 6:47:00 AM
Loved it - Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:54:00 AM
THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!!!! Tahera. Simply brilliant. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:19:00 AM
congrats Tahera on your third place win.
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:32:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support ..luv..
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:35:00 AM
Spectacular Tahera.. super entry my friend.. and good luck in Jared's contest.. am working on my own entry today ... a special piece so sweetly penned with luv..
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:30:00 AM
Nice love story Tahera!!!! beautiful poetry my dear poet friend...luv Michael
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Date: 12/7/2010 2:54:00 AM
Beatiful, lovely, innocent love pictured with flowing words, I think you are referring to some legendery love story of the Arabian desert. I am trying to remember that love story, Tahera This goes to my favorite
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:03:00 PM
A magnificent poem, Tahera. The story was spellbinding and I loved the romance! I don't know which contest you've entered, but you really show great style here! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:54:00 PM
lovely picture of a story which is so lyrical and filled with defining metaphors, tahera... best wishes in this contest.. hope to see you in my side of town! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:53:00 PM
wow, what a wonderful entry this is for the contest, very steamy, love it
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:47:00 PM
what a great creation on love
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