Innocense

ah yes so sweet the tender heat, the blazing inbuilt fire, estacy like popcorn sweet, engulfs us with desire... Don Johnson 19-july-11 love was sweet but in the past, loving thoughts of other times, never thought i'd be alone, solo, single, doin my time. Don

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/9/2011 12:01:00 AM

This is just great Don...Enjoyed the read!!!!luv it!!!

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/21/2011 8:44:00 PM

Wow brother, I can feel your pain...not alone mate...you've got friends here who care very much about you, in our thoughts and hearts...need to get this bloody tear out of my eye, we all love you mate! Thanks for you gracious and kind comments on If you were gone complete, means so much...My Aussie mate Gent...give em hell, hang in there mate!

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/19/2011 6:01:00 PM

another wonderful piece Don

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 7:31:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Don. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 12:45:00 AM

jutting out from the romantic period, don... i am almost fainting.. what sheer delight! come visit..:) huggs, nette

Don Johnson
Date: 7/19/2011 1:48:00 AM

Nette, A lovely thought, entrancement sought, too beautiful by far, my heart would break, my soul would ache, if you pushed me out the door. frog not prince...adore's

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 6:37:00 PM

somebody open a window ..oh ..this is sultry and steamy and sizzling too.. much like your comments DON.. innocence quickly fades when passion invades luv..oh hot..