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Innocence Under the Sun

The crest of golden hue. The air brisk with cold anew. Fields beckon for one to come Chase dreams under the sun Twist ankles in the stream Water played with doesn’t make wishes clean Mud on face and caked on knees Joyous wonder in dappled water under the trees. Laughter and twinkling of bright innocent eyes Grazes and bruises can not disguise What feelings we had when we were young Chasing our dreams under the sun.

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Date: 12/7/2023 2:05:00 PM
This made me smile. The last lines "what feelings we had when we were young, chasing our dream under the sun" was truly the perfect ending of this poem. You are amazing! :>
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Date: 10/24/2023 10:57:00 PM
Hello A Yorkshire Poet :-) Lovely write! My favorite line: What feelings we had when we were young! Have a nice day ~AA
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Date: 10/13/2023 4:22:00 AM
This is like a time capsule of thought. How free we were as kids playing in the sun. No worries of skin cancer, sun screen, or even wasting time. The day was carefree. Good times. Great write!
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A Yorkshire Poet
Date: 10/17/2023 8:07:00 AM
Hi Karen, Thanks very much, I’m glad that you like it. Cheers,

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