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Innocence of Youth

Acquiescing to love's defeat, you subdue sad feelings within. For when passion's flame flickers out, anxieties slowly begin. Dominating reality; bitter tears flow with brutal force. And wash away the promises, that kept your hopes and dreams on course. The weight of betrayal hits you with the force of a speeding train. And you're left spinning in a trance, oblivious to all but pain. Fueled by half-truths and deceit; your happy thoughts begin to ebb. And soon, your vulnerable heart falls victim to depression's web. Your soul's susceptible to lies, for love camouflages the truth. And salvaging remnants of trust, you shed the innocence of youth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2018 8:57:00 PM
Ouch - "And salvaging remnants of trust you discard innocence of youth." That has to be the most disappointing milestone of growing up! Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/9/2015 11:06:00 AM
You have penned a well written and descriptive write. I enjoyed the read. ~Caryl
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/10/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Caryl, I appreciate your words of encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 7/5/2015 5:47:00 PM
Hello Emile!! An exceptional well-done write here. Betrayal and half-truths among other disappointments can certainly negatively affect the innocence of youth. What a great theme with a quite poignant message. (7/FAV!!) Best Always, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Gary, your comments and friendly visits are always most welcome. Emile.

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