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Innocence of Youth

Acquiescing to love's defeat, you subdue sad feelings within. For when passion's all but over, anxieties slowly begin. Dominating reality, bitter tears flow with brutal force. And wash away the promises that kept your hopes and dreams on course. The hurt of betrayal hits you with the force of a speeding train. And you're left, as if in a trance, oblivious to all but pain. Fueled by half-truths and deceit, your happiness begins to ebb. And soon, your vulnerable heart, falls victim to depression's web. Your soul's susceptible to lies, for hope camouflages the truth. And salvaging remnants of trust, you miss the innocence of youth. (Quatrain) 7/4/2015

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Date: 3/6/2018 8:57:00 PM
Ouch - "And salvaging remnants of trust you discard innocence of youth." That has to be the most disappointing milestone of growing up! Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/9/2015 11:06:00 AM
You have penned a well written and descriptive write. I enjoyed the read. ~Caryl
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/10/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Caryl, I appreciate your words of encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 7/5/2015 5:47:00 PM
Hello Emile!! An exceptional well-done write here. Betrayal and half-truths among other disappointments can certainly negatively affect the innocence of youth. What a great theme with a quite poignant message. (7/FAV!!) Best Always, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Gary, your comments and friendly visits are always most welcome. Emile.

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