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Innocence Lost

In the midst of midnight dreams, like a whisper, soft and subtle, her soul floated like a butterfly. Reaching the province of Paphian passion, portraying Aphrodite's desire for Adonis, solitude sighed with sensual delight - her vibrations echoing in the silence. In her forbidden flower garden, tip of his tongue composed symphonies of forgotten sensations and flowing verses - serenading suppressed infatuations. His soul kissed poetry upon her satin skin, carving poetic sensations not heard before. Two lovers embraced in perfect rhyme, an innocence lost, but engraved in time.
Silent One Simple Musing 25 November 2018
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Ashley Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Returning for a reread.. I’m enchanted by the sensual romance of your exquisite poem, Silent One. Dreamy passion so artistically expressed. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Longest time my friend... This is wow! Romantic! Romantic! So so so romantic!
Lindley Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:40 AM
This i truly a hot, sensual and deeply romantic poem that sends this reader back to my youth and the flowers that I was blessed to have found and loved. A fav.. stirs this old poet's romantic heart..
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 6:18 PM
wow, well done. THIS line I adored: His soul kissed poetry upon her satin skin, So enchanting!
Acquah Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Awesome I have a poem on Sound Cloud called "black lace" it took me 5 minutes to say this ! astounding write!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Hello Silent one, Wow!Wow! Wow! this will be my fav. have a nice evening my friend.
Duet Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Wow, ZZ! This is so incredibly beautiful and another golden FAV from your pen. Hugs.....
Parveen Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Flying away finding her lover in the night, smiling as they meet in the night. Caressing one another... get embroiled in your poem Silent One:) gently written, excellent.
Shines Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:58 AM
congratulations!Enjoyed reading your poem,quite romantic.have a great day!
Onclaud Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:58 PM
truly a gentle sizzler, S.O... congrats on your POTD feature!..huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Ooh la la! Great write, Silent! Congrats on POTD!
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:10 AM
This is sooooo sensual, I think you should write a love story, It will be a best seller for sure. Have a great day Silent One. Your words are anything but silent here. I tasted every one.
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:36 AM
Congrats on POTD, S1 - wonderful write, My Friend!! :-) <3
Ball Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:50 AM
Well written and well expressed this truly deserved POTD. Well Done Silent One. Congrats God Bless, JB
Shaw Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Lovely piece Silent One - your works are so x-rated, I had to tie my granny down to stop her from reading it - phew . . . ; )
Moore Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Congrats, nicely written
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations for POTD , SO :)
Bateman Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Hello Silent One, Congratulations on POTD with this most excellent free verse. Dreamy, romantic, and passionate are the three immediate words that come to mind as I first read your poem. Well-Done!! Best Wishes, Gary
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Excellent writing , Silent One, congratulation on Poem of the Day
Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Oh, so beautifully romantic, Silent One. It's wonderful to see your poem received POTD honors. Sooo deserving. Romantic verse is the hardest for me to write. Hugs, Carolyn
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Carolyn, glad you liked this simple musing of mine..
Michael Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Moments that last forever in time...even half asleep in bed in a dream...All the best SO...Didn't see that part...Congratulations SO...Big Ship a sail....
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
This is just fiction Arturo.. Would be wonderful if it happened though.. Thanks..
Raven Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Hi Silent, just dropping by with my congratulations on this well deserved poem being given the honour of Poem Of the Day. Wonderful write my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you my friend, hope you had a great day..
Gentile Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Gorgeous verse Silent One, oozing sensuality!! A wonderful selection for POTD!! Congratulations
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thanks Mike...
Nicole Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Your words caress the page with beauty, elegance and passion. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Brandy..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Back with congrats! :) xomo <3
One Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Mo..
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