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In the midst of midnight dreams, like a whisper, soft and subtle, her soul floated like a butterfly. Reaching the province of Paphian passion, portraying Aphrodite's desire for Adonis, solitude sighed with sensual delight - her vibrations echoing in the silence. In her forbidden flower garden, tip of his tongue composed symphonies of forgotten sensations and flowing verses - serenading suppressed infatuations. His soul kissed poetry upon her satin skin, carving poetic sensations not heard before. Two lovers embraced in perfect rhyme, an innocence lost, but engraved in time.
Silent One Simple Musing 25 November 2018

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Date: 12/27/2018 9:29:00 AM
Returning for a reread.. I’m enchanted by the sensual romance of your exquisite poem, Silent One. Dreamy passion so artistically expressed. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:57:00 AM
Longest time my friend... This is wow! Romantic! Romantic! So so so romantic!
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Date: 12/16/2018 8:40:00 AM
This i truly a hot, sensual and deeply romantic poem that sends this reader back to my youth and the flowers that I was blessed to have found and loved. A fav.. stirs this old poet's romantic heart..
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Date: 12/10/2018 6:18:00 PM
wow, well done. THIS line I adored: His soul kissed poetry upon her satin skin, So enchanting!
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Date: 12/8/2018 7:48:00 PM
Awesome I have a poem on Sound Cloud called "black lace" it took me 5 minutes to say this ! astounding write!
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Date: 12/5/2018 8:16:00 PM
Hello Silent one, Wow!Wow! Wow! this will be my fav. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/2/2018 11:47:00 AM
Wow, ZZ! This is so incredibly beautiful and another golden FAV from your pen. Hugs.....
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Date: 12/2/2018 6:47:00 AM
Flying away finding her lover in the night, smiling as they meet in the night. Caressing one another... get embroiled in your poem Silent One:) gently written, excellent.
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:58:00 AM
congratulations!Enjoyed reading your poem,quite romantic.have a great day!
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Date: 11/28/2018 2:58:00 PM
truly a gentle sizzler, S.O... congrats on your POTD feature!..huggs
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:36:00 PM
Ooh la la! Great write, Silent! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 11/27/2018 6:10:00 AM
This is sooooo sensual, I think you should write a love story, It will be a best seller for sure. Have a great day Silent One. Your words are anything but silent here. I tasted every one.
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Date: 11/27/2018 4:36:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, S1 - wonderful write, My Friend!! :-) <3
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Date: 11/27/2018 3:50:00 AM
Well written and well expressed this truly deserved POTD. Well Done Silent One. Congrats God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/26/2018 8:43:00 PM
Lovely piece Silent One - your works are so x-rated, I had to tie my granny down to stop her from reading it - phew . . . ; )
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Date: 11/26/2018 6:58:00 PM
Congrats, nicely written
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Date: 11/26/2018 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD , SO :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 4:38:00 PM
Hello Silent One, Congratulations on POTD with this most excellent free verse. Dreamy, romantic, and passionate are the three immediate words that come to mind as I first read your poem. Well-Done!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 11/26/2018 3:28:00 PM
Excellent writing , Silent One, congratulation on Poem of the Day
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Date: 11/26/2018 2:45:00 PM
Oh, so beautifully romantic, Silent One. It's wonderful to see your poem received POTD honors. Sooo deserving. Romantic verse is the hardest for me to write. Hugs, Carolyn
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn, glad you liked this simple musing of mine..
Date: 11/26/2018 1:52:00 PM
Moments that last forever in time...even half asleep in bed in a dream...All the best SO...Didn't see that part...Congratulations SO...Big Ship a sail....
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:10:00 PM
This is just fiction Arturo.. Would be wonderful if it happened though.. Thanks..
Date: 11/26/2018 12:31:00 PM
Hi Silent, just dropping by with my congratulations on this well deserved poem being given the honour of Poem Of the Day. Wonderful write my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you my friend, hope you had a great day..
Date: 11/26/2018 12:07:00 PM
Gorgeous verse Silent One, oozing sensuality!! A wonderful selection for POTD!! Congratulations
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Mike...
Date: 11/26/2018 11:42:00 AM
Your words caress the page with beauty, elegance and passion. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Brandy..
Date: 11/26/2018 11:38:00 AM
Back with congrats! :) xomo <3
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Mo..
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