Innocence

A weeping willow gently sways amidst A baby robin taking its very first breath. They were young, in love And knew no other This was their moment, to be cherished forever. Her body so beautiful, so delicate to touch His masculinity soared over the sky above. Entwined as ivy, united as one They soaked in the passion of the blazing hot sun. A girl's silhouette shyly covers her hand As a starried eye boy becomes a man.

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James Inman

Date: 8/18/2024 9:46:00 PM

Lynn, your are a great poet, never doubt that.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2017 9:07:00 AM

Going through your poems again, Lynne. This is one of your best; it's a pleasure to be reading it again. I stick to my original comments, while adding this gem to my favs:) Warm regards // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/18/2017 8:02:00 PM

Good Evening Lynn. How lovely is this. Very. How fitting and perfect is the title. Very. Oh the sweetness and tenderness of it all. I very much enjoyed this. I so adore entries of love of any kind. This is marvelous and the ending brings it home. Have a wonderful night. Well done entirely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2017 10:38:00 AM

wowow, I LOVE this. this one gets a FAVE

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2017 3:21:00 PM

I love how you tackled this subject, Lynn. You describe this unforgettable moment with delicate yet strong images. Beautiful! Warm regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 8/30/2016 11:58:00 AM

Oh my Lynn! His first time. Sweet and mildly sensual, very nice.