Innocence

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May-16-2025
Bite Size poem. No. 111 Poetry Contest
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Once I ran, forgetting myself in rising excitement, after fireflies bearing tiny torches of light. Hunted after tree Dryads in the neighbouring woods, and summoned tooth fairies to do my homework. Innocence is what dissociates a child from an adult.

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Date: 5/17/2025 3:14:00 PM
Sweet innocence of childhood, so precious to remember! Adorably written, Valsa! <3
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Date: 5/17/2025 5:10:00 AM
A very beautiful poem dear valsa, its so nice how your words flow and how youv delivered your thoughts and what innocence of childhood was like youv described that so very well! I love the tooth fairy bit! And fireflies i ddnt notice them until much later in life! Pleasure reading your poem! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/16/2025 8:42:00 AM
You can't know unless you try, which is a wonderful life lesson for youngsters. We can only move forward, yet there are procedures to relive childhood innocence. Many thanks for bringing this to our attention. How delightful, dear Valsa. Sending blessings
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Date: 5/16/2025 7:37:00 AM
Oh!! In some ways to experience the innocence once again, but we can't go back only forward. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I asked my husband to explain to me how Jesus Who existed before the world was formed could become a baby to be born in Bethlehem so long ago. He just did some questioning shoulder movement and hand movements. LOL..Sara K
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Date: 5/16/2025 6:46:00 AM
So beautiful and charming, Valsa!
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Date: 5/16/2025 1:17:00 AM
just wonderful, being a child for two minutes is awesome, enjoyed
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