Innocence

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We become our worst enemies, thus self reflection

Long ago a year or so I received accolades a plenty I won this, and I won that I was on top of it all I was almost the whole shebang I was important I was all about me I pandered and pounded I wanted attention and I won I was sad, when my cheating was undone Caught with the red herring deep in my mouth I left to sulk a bit and have a wee pout then I figured out after I was caught there was a way to still receive the praise I so sought once a month that's how she works post only then the egoists trophy is my new perk

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/28/2018 12:42:00 AM

so have to rub out the ego! /// lovely writings

Brendan Solomon

Date: 11/27/2018 10:19:00 PM

Whoever could you mean, I wonder? Classic Bear style

Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2018 8:55:00 PM

A story tells a story...

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2018 6:14:00 AM

Lol Arthur you sure tell it as it is, but this person sure is a fishy character. I enter fewer contests have slipped down so many lists but I still try and remain active on the site, I will fiercely contest the one title I have... the queen of poop on soup lol, adding this gem to my faves:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brendan Solomon
Date: 11/27/2018 10:19:00 PM

Lmao

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/27/2018 4:41:00 AM

- I've never been concerned about titles, trophies, medal or stars - I do my best and that's good enough :) - (Answer to my last poem: - The world is cold ... both of ice and human feelings .... ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/27/2018 4:46:00 AM

The world is cold, you are a bright light that warms us all!!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/27/2018 4:45:00 AM

Still I give you a trophy, filled with hugs!!!!!