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Inner Wars

The battle in your chest Would make a strong heart tremble; But I braced against the test: Survival’s not so simple. We marched until the boots Split seams from heavy wear; My mother’s troubled roots Turned gray with every scare. The hand that gripped my arm Was scarred from every fray; At every step that harmed, My heart would start to sway. You beat time on my soul With a weight I could not see, Then led me through the toll Still leaning close to me.

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Date: 4/27/2024 10:48:00 PM
Very powerful poetry. I can relate.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/27/2024 11:24:00 PM
Thanks Arthur. Much appreciated. Cheers, Don
Date: 4/27/2024 8:01:00 PM
I love the rhythm and rhyme and original concept!
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/27/2024 11:25:00 PM
Hi Karen, I really appreciate your comments. Be well. Don

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