Inner Struggle

Exactly what is it that I do? 
Or for that matter 
What difference do I make? 
Will all of my failures collide?
Where will I hide my pride? 
Who will be on my side? 
Maybe I was built to break
Or maybe just a mistake
Sucked into a black hole
All those hopes and wishes
Everything at stake
All those struggles in my soul
Wondering if I will reach my goal
Trying to find out who I am
My identity just implodes 
Like a broken dam 
Rushing out of control! 

18.8.22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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August 21, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Awesome write my dear friend Carol! It's inner struggle that reaveals light. Love your poem and the ending is great! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
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