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Inner Stirrings

he rose from ashes
with a trace of renewed hope
adjusting to the idea

that maybe

maybe some day
he'd be ready
to make new memories



AP: 1st place 2021

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2021

appreciationconfidencefuturegriefhopefree verse

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Paula Goldsmith

October 4, 2021 at 9:26 AM

A wonderful write and fall picture. I am going down your pretty colorful street. It could be he or she. Have a blessed day writing away.................

October 4, 2021 at 8:52 PM

Absolutely, thanks for your visit and comment, Paula ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

October 3, 2021 at 5:01 AM

We are like the Phoenix ~ we can rise from the ashes...Delice

October 3, 2021 at 6:44 AM

one can only hope ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 1, 2021 at 11:36 AM

Hello Lin, yes Milton is right, this is a meditating poem. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 2, 2021 at 11:24 AM

Hello Lin, you are welcome. my friend. I hop allis well with you. Hugs.

October 1, 2021 at 8:08 PM

Thanks, Darlene ~

L Milton Hankins

October 1, 2021 at 9:24 AM

Lovely lines, Line. I spent a good deal of time thinking about the "he" of your poem. This is a poem for meditating.

October 1, 2021 at 8:08 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Milton ~

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