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Inner Stirrings

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he rose from ashes
with a trace of renewed hope
adjusting to the idea

that maybe

maybe some day
he'd be ready
to make new memories



AP: 1st place 2021

Posted on October 1, 2021

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2021

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/4/2021 9:26:00 AM A wonderful write and fall picture. I am going down your pretty colorful street. It could be he or she. Have a blessed day writing away................. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/4/2021 8:52:00 PM Absolutely, thanks for your visit and comment, Paula ~

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 10/3/2021 5:01:00 AM We are like the Phoenix ~ we can rise from the ashes...Delice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/3/2021 6:44:00 AM one can only hope ~

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/1/2021 11:36:00 AM Hello Lin, yes Milton is right, this is a meditating poem. Hugs. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/2/2021 11:24:00 AM Hello Lin, you are welcome. my friend. I hop allis well with you. Hugs. Line Gauthier Date: 10/1/2021 8:08:00 PM Thanks, Darlene ~

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/1/2021 9:24:00 AM Lovely lines, Line. I spent a good deal of time thinking about the "he" of your poem. This is a poem for meditating. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/1/2021 8:08:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Milton ~