Rama Balasubramanian Poet Tetractys

Inner Self

Our 
face is
a mirror
of inner self.
Our emotions are reflected on face.
A 
person 
who has good 
thoughts and feelings
will have a natural glow in his face

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Most of us criticize others when free.
If we peek in
we will find
more faults
in
self
than what
we saw out.
We realise 
we have to improve self before we talk.

Premier contest winner 6th place

Date: 10/27/2020 11:04:00 AM
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JC Brul November 3, 2020 at 12:45 AM Very evocative piece! The true essence of innermost reflection is deeply conveyed in this brilliant write. Congratulations. Rama Balasubramanian November 3, 2020 at 3:15 AM Thanks for your uplifting comments. Such comments by a great poet like you makes my day. Take care, have a great day ahead. Regards Rama

Linda Alice Fowler November 2, 2020 at 11:29 AM I like the form that you used for this one Rama. Very nice :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Rama Balasubramanian November 3, 2020 at 3:22 AM Thanks. Appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care, Regards, Rama

Susan Ashley November 1, 2020 at 10:57 AM The expression of your "inner self" reflects the beauty of your authentic soul, Rama. I adore and admire your exquisite poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle's contest with this inspiring piece.. ~Susan Rama Balasubramanian November 1, 2020 at 9:52 PM Your uplifting comments made my day. Such comments that too from a great poet like you... What more can one ask for? Congratulations on your trophy win. Well deserved. Have a great day ahead. Take care, regards Rama

Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2020 at 9:45 AM Congratulations, Rama. You have used such a great form of poetry. Beautiful! Rama Balasubramanian November 1, 2020 at 9:49 PM Thanks friend. Your uplifting comments made my day. Take care, Regards Rama

Sam Kauffman November 1, 2020 at 9:25 AM Engage mind and soul then open mouth! So well done, Rama, with a loving touch! Congratulations on your win! Rama Balasubramanian November 1, 2020 at 9:43 PM Thanks Sam. Appreciate your taking time off to congratulate me. Well done from a great poet like you makes my day. Thanks once again. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Regards, Rama

Gershon Wolf October 29, 2020 at 5:22 PM Sage advice, Rama! Silence is Golden. :) Gershon Rama Balasubramanian October 30, 2020 at 7:37 AM Indeed golden. Thanks. Take care Rama